Well it looks like it over
We've come to the end of our road
Tell me...is it really over
Theres so much left untold
Shouild we go on pretending
Or just let it all unfold
All i wanted was your love to hold
Tell me how did it all grow old
All you needed was love to free you
Tell me how to let us go
All i ever wanted was for you to be you
So here we are..the end of the line
Tell me...how do we say goodbye
Both holding onto something
That long ago died
Lets stop pretending and start the ending

Im Likein the poem despite it being sad. Unfortunately i can relate to it come lately.

Nice write...can really relate to it ;)

This one sure hits hard. Nice piece.

Sad but necessary, painful-yet freeing in the end. Nice write

'Tell me...how do we say goodbye
Both holding onto something
That long ago died
Lets stop pretending and start the ending'


I can't tell you how meaningful those four lines are. Very lovely and bitterswseet...

very nice
very real
too often lived

I hope your well Jenn, and I hope your happy.

Great Poem...

So true, so touching. Thanks!

thank-you everyone for reading and for your kind comments!

Good write :flower: