To have some fun.
To finish up school.
To find the one.
To act a fool.

To drink some beer.
To have a smoke.
To kiss a girl.
To take a toke.

To watch the Cubs.
To avoid the Sox.
To visit Pubs.
To munch some box.

To write a song.
To smile more.
To right a wrong.
To open a door.

To take a chance.
To reach new heights.
To learn to dance.
To avoid some fights.

The New Year brings opportunities new,
A chance for us to change what we do,
So make the best of all you can,
and shut the **** up, and act like a man.

what do you mean "eat some box"?

What do you mean avoid the Sox?

Hope your talking of White Sox not my Red Sox!


Cute write.. hope you really stick to it though!!!

If you don't know honey,
it hasn't happened to you.

Well I believe its a VULGAR reference to a sexual act. But I just wanted clarification before I passed judgement on how derrogatory that sounds

OK,,the BOX was rude..
But the rest was cool.
ME...I just want to be truly seen as one lady's EVERYTHING!

I might have to wait for a couple more resolutions,wink,lol

Seriously? It was intended to be a light hearted, joking reference to finding ways to enjoy the New Year. I'm sorry I'm not Walt Whitman, but I do the best I can.

Well it was a very nice poem until the reference of eating boxes

I believe he stated munch not eat,wink,lol
But both are a bit stright out..
You should have said nibbled her bump, before I humped.
wink,,,,,NOW I DONE IT.....
I mean BOX is fairly pretty damm tame.

Its cool man,,your attempt out weighs any perceptions that might have been seen as vulgar...

I can't believe how up tight people can be sometimes, I mean my god it was something obviously said as a light hearted humorous write. Not all poetry has to be slit your wrist serious, though I am guilty of such.

<<-----soooooooooooooooooo with her on this one. Really.

<<---sticking a big bar of soap in Terry's mouth

I'm glad someone sees what I'm saying, you can be funny without having to say something derrogatory

did someone ring the censorship patrol

i see the use of the word as a reference to pop culture and slang



this crowd generally posts with taste though if you really read some of d4tc, you'll catch some coded raunch

we don't all say it the same, do we?

I said the poem was nice but that reference was vulger I'm sorry that in my opinion it is. I'm not messaging big brother to take down his poem or anything i was voicing my opinion.

As long as I had fun it's ok.

I thought it was very human and not vulgar to have a wish, now is it. I enjoyed it. Keep up the efforts and hope your NY wishes come true.