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It's New Year's Eve,
Twelve o'clock, For a moment, My heart did stop. Waiting, wondering, For a moment such as this, When our lips meet, An everlasting kiss. Sirens, bells sound, Ringing in my air, My heart a flutter, I have no cares. Lifted in this... One blazing desire, A kiss that burns, A branded soul afire. Lost in one single second, As if time stopped, As you kissed me, While the ball dropped. It's a mere dream, As I sit alone, Waiting here by, The unringing phone. Time is approaching, Fellas get in line, Can I find that ONE kiss, One last time? The kiss which changes, My longing, my fate, The kiss which whisks me off, The one for which I wait. They say if you're kissed, Just as the clock strikes midnight, A year of love will follow, Aye, the hope for a Mr. Right. Ah, one single kiss, Which isn't JUST a kiss, It is truly the thing, This heart does miss. SDF Dec 30, 2008 |
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very nice writing. Thank you for sharing this.
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Very good writing!
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Happy New Year Mysti...may you receive your kiss!
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Good write. Heartfelt. Love the line about the year of love to follow.
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Here's hoping you get that kiss that curls your toes-wonderful write and Happy New Year
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"The kiss which changes,
My longing, my fate, The kiss which whisks me off, <<< The one for which I wait". What a glorious parade of destiny and tranquil dreams await you in this sea of love. May the kiss be sweet and long lasting. Thank you and Happy New Year |
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I hope you get your kiss.
I am still waiting for mine, maybe this year I will get one. I like it very much!!! |
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Thank you MrsKaters
100 Wishing you a very Happy New Year! horsegirl... may you get your kiss as well! brwn...Happy New Year to you too! pkd... one can only hope! Happy New year! d4...Happy New Year! Thank you. Angel... hugs to you. Happy New Year! Skp... Thank you. |
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Sirens, bells sound,
Ringing in my air, My heart a flutter, I have no cares. Lifted in this... One blazing desire, A kiss that burns, A branded soul afire. Whoooooo. Waiting for a kiss like that too. I loved it! |
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I hope you get your kiss as well Laura! Happy New Year to you!
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