I've decided that what
We want to hear
Isn't necessarily what
We need to hear
As we stumble
And fumble and
Crumble under the
Weight of our wrongs
Why does it take so long
To undo or redo or
Attempt something new
Words don't ring true
As I march on through
Thoughts left unsaid
An empty spot in the bed
Where one should be two
But the scales are tipped
My feelings are tripped
My soul lay stripped
Of all reason and rhyme
So I sit still in time
Wondering will it be fine
But the answers don't come
As I resist the urge to run
Away like the wind
Leaving all the sin
But here I remain
Feeling hurt and pain
Nothing remains the same

How true....the only thing that remains the same is change..."The world as we know it is passing.."

Very nice ((P))...heartfelt. Ty for your write and Happy New Year

Very nice =]

This piece is heavy with emotion. Read it with heart felt feelings, outloud, and a person can feel this.

Nice work Pam.

Here's to a very happy 2009 for you

I'm filled with so much emotion with this. I really have to keep myself from jumping through the screen to dance with you close and slow just once. And yes, you do remind us of Cinderella in this photo.
Love it Princess

brwnkimba

But alas, you are there and I am here-so sad because I do love to dance.

and we could have pretended I lost a slipper..but that happens only in fairytales.

thank you and glad to meet you

This was written with such strong emotions. It mad me catch my breath. Very, Very good!

i loved it

It does get better with time Pam, don't know what else to tell you, it just does..

Sometimes the rambling and writing produces some really good work. Keep rambling.

such a great rhyme of words. this write.

An inspirational write inspiring this


With pain comes blame
fingers complain
the shame game
name after dame
dame after name
rain after sun
run after one
pick on me
pick up you
what to do
twice confused
the sun has shoes
it's shade
it's sole
the shade has
gold
cool heart
smooth soul

Wonderful write and certainly heart felt! Hugs to you dear lady!

This is so touching. Nice write.

And within change comes healing, knowledge and the hope for a better
today and faith that within tomorrow
life is full and blessings surround us

(((( Pam ))))

Angelface is right. The only thing that never changes is change.

You're surrounded by your sisters in arms and love darling. That wont change either.

breathing deeply for us both-thanks horsegirl