Topic: Our Last Night
Dresden8621's photo
Mon 12/29/08 12:13 PM
Our Last Night


Our lives went different ways, our lives weren't the same. I loved her and she loved me, but that was not enough, other forces decided to intervene. We had to leave, say goodbye. It hurts deep down and I will never forget that last night we had together.

"We laid down, holding hands, knowing it will never happen again for many years, whispering 'I love you'.On both sides of the bed, clenching our hands, foreheads touching, knees resting side by side. Looking into her eyes, never before has mind been so full of thoughts yet silent at the same time. Stretching out necks, we began to kiss, tears running down my face. Wanting to hold her so badly, reaching my arm and drawing her close to feel her warmth, her breath, her heart beat, her skin, her essence. Sucking up all i could for this is a night that may remain in my mind for... forever. Our legs crossed and entangled. Our arms wrapped and met its twin around each other. Holding firmly and gently and sweetly.My mouth wandered, kissing her the corner of her lip, the side of her cheek, the end of her jaw, the nape of her neck, the tip of her shoulder, and up, to the bottom of her ear, the top of it, the center of her forehead, the end of her nose, then back to her lips breathing in, trying to draw in her soul which I couldn't take with me. Withdrawing, we stared into each other's eyes, staring into each other's soul. A few seconds stretching to infinity, lifetimes passing, moments flashing, hearts breaking, then returning to kiss her sweet, soft lips and to feel that that soft tongue with its gentle strokes. I felt an urge of Roman hands and Russian fingers, grasping onto the beauty that lay before me. Then lifting up to the brim of her pants, and back down just enough so they tips of my pinkies could feel the heat that was radiant. Following it around to its front, softly unbuttoning and unzipping. While she pulls down and reveals the beauty within, I do the same, removing my shirt and my pants just in time to help her lift her shirt. I held her arms above her head with the ring of the shirt still covering her eyes but not her mouth, I steal a kiss. Laying her back down, escorting her head to the pillow. Kissing her again and again. Fully aroused, I slide above her and discreetly insert myself into her beauty. She let off a great, silent sigh, then bites her lips in pleasure. Me caringly and forcefully work back and forth, up and down. Heavey panting consuming the air, heat rising exponentially. Again and Again and Again. Sweat dripping from our bodies, our eyes fixed until... Pure ecstacy takes over both of us, silent screams and loud moans. I lay back down and wrap my right arm around her, kiss her deeply once more. Pull the covers up to mid-body and drift away into bliss, while a tear runs down my cheek."

Our last night...together, may have happened in one night, but will last a lifetime.


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Haloheldbyhorns's photo
Mon 12/29/08 12:18 PM
You are an excellent writer Dude. all my teachers in scholl told me I would grow up to be a writer and I am finally getting around to it LOL

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Mon 12/29/08 04:34 PM
Oh to sweet ecstacy-nice writeflowerforyou flowerforyou