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Take me Touch me Read to me From your book of life. Don’t push me, Shove me, or Hide from me, Your sorrows and your strife. Your path, you think, You walk alone In memory’s dreary site. Riddled with boulders Including those on your shoulders, Hiding you from the light. Look up, Look out, Yes, look all around, The hand is waiting there. A rope is thrown, The way is known, St--ret-c------------h-ing you past that misconstrued fear. Although, in the words of Donkey, “That’s a nice boul--der”! In the words of Wench, “Rock climbin’ time --- Crawl on up and “see what you can seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!”. |
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TTR Take me Touch me Read to me From your book of life. Don’t push me, Shove me, or Hide from me, Your sorrows and your strife. Your path, you think, You walk alone In memory’s dreary site. Riddled with boulders Including those on your shoulders, Hiding you from the light. Look up, Look out, Yes, look all around, The hand is waiting there. A rope is thrown, The way is known, St--ret-c------------h-ing you past that misconstrued fear. Although, in the words of Donkey, “That’s a nice boul--der”! In the words of Wench, “Rock climbin’ time --- Crawl on up and “see what you can seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!”.  nice
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Oo.. very cute...
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Nice , expressive in so few words
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That's fabulous
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Mon 12/29/08 10:50 AM
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that was very nice
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wisdom from Wench-always good to hear...
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that was nice.
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Neat write Dkow....beautiful sentiment and imagery.
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Nice!
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TTR Take me Touch me Read to me From your book of life. Don’t push me, Shove me, or Hide from me, Your sorrows and your strife. Your path, you think, You walk alone In memory’s dreary site. Riddled with boulders Including those on your shoulders, Hiding you from the light. Look up, Look out, Yes, look all around, The hand is waiting there. A rope is thrown, The way is known, St--ret-c------------h-ing you past that misconstrued fear. Although, in the words of Donkey, “That’s a nice boul--der”! In the words of Wench, “Rock climbin’ time --- Crawl on up and “see what you can seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!”. Dang woman. You got some kind of talent. YOu need to write more. Seriously.
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Thanks all! Happy Holidays and may the new year riddle y'all with wondiferous surprises and happiness!
Wiz, thank-you. The common denominator in my stuff I like seems to be emotional motivation of some sort, i.e. either cheer leading or mucking around in the psyche or retelling something I ended up finding amusing. I actually submitted something to a card company, but they wanted tag lines, not poetry. This is why I enjoy going back through old threads. Along with finding great writings and fond memories with friends, I find new sites and stuff to check out. What I'm trying to say, your encouragement brings touching tears and excuse me please, I need to go blow my nose, so I won't blow you a kiss, but just lay on the heart......
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Happy Holidays to you as well! Wishing you the very best in the coming new year. I love your writes...keep up the great work!
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Thanks all! Happy Holidays and may the new year riddle y'all with wondiferous surprises and happiness! Wiz, thank-you. The common denominator in my stuff I like seems to be emotional motivation of some sort, i.e. either cheer leading or mucking around in the psyche or retelling something I ended up finding amusing. I actually submitted something to a card company, but they wanted tag lines, not poetry. This is why I enjoy going back through old threads. Along with finding great writings and fond memories with friends, I find new sites and stuff to check out. What I'm trying to say, your encouragement brings touching tears and excuse me please, I need to go blow my nose, so I won't blow you a kiss, but just lay on the heart...... Back atcha Sistah
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