Topic: City Girl
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Tue 12/23/08 02:44 PM
Two hearts longing to touch,
to reach out to each other
across the great expanse of miles
that separate them.
A longing to hold each other.
Hearts beating together in rhythme.
Longing to bridge this distance between them.
She in a city bright lighted,
the City of Angels.
Glitter and Glamour surround her.
She quietly walks in beat to the sounds
of what has become for her
a way of life, city life.

And he finds comfort
among the tall peaked mountains.
He walks where eagles fly,
and stands looking out at the
natural beauty, awed and inspired.
Yet his heart longs for the only beauty
he wants to lay his eyes upon;
His City Girl.

Quietly he walks along the banks of
the stream that flows through
the forested valleys, flowing
through beautiful flower carpeted
meadows soaking in a rainbow of
reds and blues, pinks and yellows.

As he stands beneath a tall pine,
he see's her.


A vision of her standing
at the edge of the meadow.
Her long dark, beautiful hair
gently blowing in the breeze.
He longs to reach for her.
And as he watches she
reaches out her arms,
calling to him.
He crosses the meadow
to be with his City Girl.

But then the vision
begins to dissipate.
The distance between them grows.
She then turns away,
with a tear in her eye,
He knows she is going
back to the bright city lights.

While he stands alone among the tall
jagged peaks, looking out across
the shore of an alpine lake
the fiery sunset reminds him
of the fire in his heart.
A fire that burns
for the love of a
beautiful City Girl.



horsegirl55's photo
Tue 12/23/08 02:47 PM

Two hearts longing to touch,
to reach out to each other
across the great expanse of miles
that separate them.
A longing to hold each other.
Hearts beating together in rhythme.
Longing to bridge this distance between them.
She in a city bright lighted,
the City of Angels.
Glitter and Glamour surround her.
She quietly walks in beat to the sounds
of what has become for her
a way of life, city life.

And he finds comfort
among the tall peaked mountains.
He walks where eagles fly,
and stands looking out at the
natural beauty, awed and inspired.
Yet his heart longs for the only beauty
he wants to lay his eyes upon;
His City Girl.

Quietly he walks along the banks of
the stream that flows through
the forested valleys, flowing
through beautiful flower carpeted
meadows soaking in a rainbow of
reds and blues, pinks and yellows.

As he stands beneath a tall pine,
he see's her.


A vision of her standing
at the edge of the meadow.
Her long dark, beautiful hair
gently blowing in the breeze.
He longs to reach for her.
And as he watches she
reaches out her arms,
calling to him.
He crosses the meadow
to be with his City Girl.

But then the vision
begins to dissipate.
The distance between them grows.
She then turns away,
with a tear in her eye,
He knows she is going
back to the bright city lights.

While he stands alone among the tall
jagged peaks, looking out across
the shore of an alpine lake
the fiery sunset reminds him
of the fire in his heart.
A fire that burns
for the love of a
beautiful City Girl.





Ron, that was wonderful!!!!!!flowerforyou

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Tue 12/23/08 02:51 PM
Thank you HG. Much appreciated.

carold's photo
Tue 12/23/08 02:55 PM
Really Good it draws you into it. Liked it :)

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Tue 12/23/08 03:06 PM
Hi Carol. Thanks for your thoughts.

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Wed 12/24/08 09:46 AM
your poem is awesome but a little sad still great thanks 4 sharing it.happy

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Wed 12/24/08 11:08 AM
too bad there's not a happy medium of half city and half country...nice writeflowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 12/24/08 11:35 AM

your poem is awesome but a little sad still great thanks 4 sharing it.happy


Unfortunatly it is a bit sad. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and your thoughts.

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Wed 12/24/08 11:37 AM
Edited by WWRange on Wed 12/24/08 11:37 AM

too bad there's not a happy medium of half city and half country...nice writeflowerforyou flowerforyou



Maybe for some there can be,,,,,but for others??


Thanks for your comments and stopping by to read Pam.:heart:

kc0003's photo
Wed 12/24/08 07:36 PM
nice to see you on this side of the fence

welcome and enjoy your stay

drinker

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Thu 12/25/08 04:34 AM
Hey kc good to see you. Thanks for the welcome.