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Edited by
MsWizard
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It’s friday night
that day of the week she can pretend he loves her pretend he cares thoughtfully she sits and stares her mind distracted brushing her hair as she wonders why she settles for so little … … when she has so much to give … really it's no way to live unfulfilled utilized as a weekly plaything his own personal breathing blow up doll when he first came around she thought she had found a kindred soul someone to know who she is who she was and who she could and would be given the chance to flourish under a warm loving gaze foolish girl… with time her hopes faded her visions now jaded her dreams withered away under that sterile cold gaze warmed only when his passions are ignited incited and fulfilled according to his calendar his agenda… grabbing her keys walking out the door deliberately heading out for more disillusion confusion emotional assault yet another night of manufactured love temporary as a wipe on tattoo … you’d think she’d know by now there is no raising of the dead … she heads down the stairs shaking her head murmuring to herself in self deprecation “there’s not much joy being the toy of a ...shallow .....selfish .......callow … boy” … dec 10, 2008 |
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WOW, this is a very hard hitting piece. You are able to capture and put into words what many have experienced. You truly are a beautiful writer with a beautiful soul and loving heart.
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 brutally honest write 
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You capture that of which haunts many women. I myself witness my mom live the life that you describe here.
And the fact that people can recognize the feelings from this poem saddens me. Many guys have put out a bad rep for the rest. But no one should ever settle for less, you should always settle only on what feels right and lasts. Jumping into first felt feelings can always be a taboo that most always leads to something like this poem describes. |
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It’s friday night that day of the week she can pretend he loves her pretend he cares thoughtfully she sits and stares her mind distracted brushing her hair as she wonders why she settles for so little … … when she has so much to give … really it's no way to live unfulfilled utilized as a weekly plaything his own personal breathing blow up doll when he first came around she thought she had found a kindred soul someone to know who she is who she was and who she could and would be given the chance to flourish under a warm loving gaze foolish girl… with time her hopes faded her visions now jaded her dreams withered away under that sterile cold gaze warmed only when his passions are ignited incited and fulfilled according to his calendar his agenda… grabbing her keys walking out the door deliberately heading out for more disillusion confusion emotional assault yet another night of manufactured love temporary as a wipe on tattoo … you’d think she’d know by now there is no raising of the dead … she heads down the stairs shaking her head murmuring to herself in self deprecation “there’s not much joy being the toy of a ...shallow .....selfish .......callow … boy” … dec 10, 2008 It says a lot ... but most of all it says she made the choice to do it |
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It’s friday night that day of the week she can pretend he loves her pretend he cares thoughtfully she sits and stares her mind distracted brushing her hair as she wonders why she settles for so little … … when she has so much to give … really it's no way to live unfulfilled utilized as a weekly plaything his own personal breathing blow up doll when he first came around she thought she had found a kindred soul someone to know who she is who she was and who she could and would be given the chance to flourish under a warm loving gaze foolish girl… with time her hopes faded her visions now jaded her dreams withered away under that sterile cold gaze warmed only when his passions are ignited incited and fulfilled according to his calendar his agenda… grabbing her keys walking out the door deliberately heading out for more disillusion confusion emotional assault yet another night of manufactured love temporary as a wipe on tattoo … you’d think she’d know by now there is no raising of the dead … she heads down the stairs shaking her head murmuring to herself in self deprecation “there’s not much joy being the toy of a ...shallow .....selfish .......callow … boy” … dec 10, 2008 It says a lot ... but most of all it says she made the choice to do it Ya think? I believe that was the POINT of this piece. |
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brutally honest write Thank you babygirl! by the way Im lovin' that new picture! Whoo whoo! |
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You capture that of which haunts many women. I myself witness my mom live the life that you describe here. And the fact that people can recognize the feelings from this poem saddens me. Many guys have put out a bad rep for the rest. But no one should ever settle for less, you should always settle only on what feels right and lasts. Jumping into first felt feelings can always be a taboo that most always leads to something like this poem describes. We've all been there I think. Unfortunately hope does spring eternal even when it should not....thank you for reading and commenting
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brutally honest write Thank you babygirl! by the way Im lovin' that new picture! Whoo whoo! Thank you 
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It’s friday night that day of the week she can pretend he loves her pretend he cares thoughtfully she sits and stares her mind distracted brushing her hair as she wonders why she settles for so little … … when she has so much to give … really it's no way to live unfulfilled utilized as a weekly plaything his own personal breathing blow up doll when he first came around she thought she had found a kindred soul someone to know who she is who she was and who she could and would be given the chance to flourish under a warm loving gaze foolish girl… with time her hopes faded her visions now jaded her dreams withered away under that sterile cold gaze warmed only when his passions are ignited incited and fulfilled according to his calendar his agenda… grabbing her keys walking out the door deliberately heading out for more disillusion confusion emotional assault yet another night of manufactured love temporary as a wipe on tattoo … you’d think she’d know by now there is no raising of the dead … she heads down the stairs shaking her head murmuring to herself in self deprecation “there’s not much joy being the toy of a ...shallow .....selfish .......callow … boy” … dec 10, 2008 It says a lot ... but most of all it says she made the choice to do it While this piece does point to her making the choice we need to keep in mind sometimes making a heart wrenching choice is for the best. Many guys can also see themselves in this piece. |
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Edited by
pkd1220
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Sun 12/21/08 06:15 PM
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It says a lot ... but most of all it says she made the choice to do it While this piece does point to her making the choice we need to keep in mind sometimes making a heart wrenching choice is for the best. Many guys can also see themselves in this piece. Nothing is ever as simple as it seems specialguy. I'm sure many of us have been in relationships that were amazing in the beginning and then slowly taper off. Unfortunately, once feelings are involved, emotions tend to rule over the head. I, for one, still want to have the hope that things can change, regardless of what has come before. Hope does spring eternal in all our hearts if we allow ourselves to be TOTALLY open with our feelings. Wonderful write sweetie  |
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It says a lot ... but most of all it says she made the choice to do it While this piece does point to her making the choice we need to keep in mind sometimes making a heart wrenching choice is for the best. Many guys can also see themselves in this piece. Nothing is ever as simple as it seems specialguy. I'm sure many of us have been in relationships that were amazing in the beginning and then slowly taper off. Unfortunately, once feelings are involved, emotions tend to rule over the head. I, for one, still want to have the hope that things can change, regardless of what has come before. Hope does spring eternal in all our hearts if we allow ourselves to be TOTALLY open with our feelings. Wonderful write sweetie Exactly. Getting pulled into a relationship that appears on the surface to be the beginning of something wonderful only to find yourself wrapped up in it later on, and the other person is not, is very painful..... Kisses to you Pam
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It says a lot ... but most of all it says she made the choice to do it While this piece does point to her making the choice we need to keep in mind sometimes making a heart wrenching choice is for the best. Many guys can also see themselves in this piece. Nothing is ever as simple as it seems specialguy. I'm sure many of us have been in relationships that were amazing in the beginning and then slowly taper off. Unfortunately, once feelings are involved, emotions tend to rule over the head. I, for one, still want to have the hope that things can change, regardless of what has come before. Hope does spring eternal in all our hearts if we allow ourselves to be TOTALLY open with our feelings. Wonderful write sweetie you are quite right ... but I never said it was simple... simply a choice no matter how difficult it may be |
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It says a lot ... but most of all it says she made the choice to do it While this piece does point to her making the choice we need to keep in mind sometimes making a heart wrenching choice is for the best. Many guys can also see themselves in this piece. Nothing is ever as simple as it seems specialguy. I'm sure many of us have been in relationships that were amazing in the beginning and then slowly taper off. Unfortunately, once feelings are involved, emotions tend to rule over the head. I, for one, still want to have the hope that things can change, regardless of what has come before. Hope does spring eternal in all our hearts if we allow ourselves to be TOTALLY open with our feelings. Wonderful write sweetie you are quite right ... but I never said it was simple... simply a choice no matter how difficult it may be Once again, exactly the point of the piece. |
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Hi, I loved it!,,,just what Iam feeling right now
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It says a lot ... but most of all it says she made the choice to do it While this piece does point to her making the choice we need to keep in mind sometimes making a heart wrenching choice is for the best. Many guys can also see themselves in this piece. Nothing is ever as simple as it seems specialguy. I'm sure many of us have been in relationships that were amazing in the beginning and then slowly taper off. Unfortunately, once feelings are involved, emotions tend to rule over the head. I, for one, still want to have the hope that things can change, regardless of what has come before. Hope does spring eternal in all our hearts if we allow ourselves to be TOTALLY open with our feelings. Wonderful write sweetie you are quite right ... but I never said it was simple... simply a choice no matter how difficult it may be Once again, exactly the point of the piece. It is a good piece ... did I mention that? |
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Hi, I loved it!,,,just what Iam feeling right now Thank you Mendy...dont allow yourself to feel like that sweetie...it's never worth it in the long run
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Hi, I loved it!,,,just what Iam feeling right now Thank you Mendy...dont allow yourself to feel like that sweetie...it's never worth it in the long run |
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