I've been a member for a while now, and just gave my profile a total revision. I think it's pretty good. It's direct and to the point.
When reviewing, please keep in mind that I am trying to focus locally. I get alot of suggestions, regarding being more active in the forums. That is great, but the forums tend to focus more on meeting people who live hundereds, even thousands of miles away. Not that I don't like meeting people online who live far away, but I am looking for something offline, and local. I am mostly looking for friends, and don't want to rush things with someone I haven't met in person yet, and I also made that clear in my profile. so please , let me know what you think.

While you did indicate a casual encounter to be more your speed I think you may throw some good people off, do to the wording of your free write message, especially since it directly contradicts the by line that shows with your pic...you should also probably indicate the distance issue in the profile, since you have stated that as a concern.... it is direct though.

sounds like you just want a sex partner i could be wrong but never is

I did not say i want a sex partner!!! where do you see that. I said "friends". I don't want to put much pressure on meeting someone. I want to meet women to hang out with , and go from there. I said that very clearly!! What, is it the last line??
Is it because I said I don't want drama?? Well, I DON'T.
I simply mean I want to make friends, and if I meet someone I'm attracted to, then I'll let them know after I meet her.
Looking for a sex partner?? I read my profile and I don't see that AT ALL. Women read too much into things.

Yeah, like a casual CUP OF COFFEE!! jeez!!

I simply meant I'm looking for FRIENDS. Im not looking for an instant WIFE. If I meet someone I'm attracted to I'll let her know. No need for pressure.

I'm not desperate.

Is it " I like to have a good time" that you guys are misinterpreting??

hi 25 year old white m looking for a new person to meet from rhode island to go to monteral maybe atlantic city and looking for single domincan woman in providence south side any advice anyone anybody wanna rate my profile im in warwick rhode island

This has WHAT to do with ME??

...and would you like an apple pie with that sir..

OK, back to ME and MY PROFILE... :-)

OK what woman is gonna say " oh he doesn't want a controlling drama queen with a ton of baggage so count me out"

Sounds like the tone of it is jerky and demanding.

I hope controlling drama queens with tons of emotional baggage do. :-)

Ok let me rephrase that...
who wants to admit that they're a controlling drama queen with a ton of baggage?
Wouldn't that kind of statement ATTRACT a CDQTB who is probably in denial about it?

Okay hun, you asked for constructive criticism, the overall TONE of your paragraph leaves the impression that you can be an inconsiderate jerk, however everyone is aware that this is not how you meant to portray yourself, but you are not likely to attract anything, friends or otherwise with that kind of tone, please do not ask for opinions and then get mad when its not what you want to hear