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Brokenstings's photo
Fri 12/12/08 12:52 PM
Edited by Brokenstings on Fri 12/12/08 12:53 PM
as i sit and contimplate the seconds,minuets,and hours pass by. Leaving me alone in dark shadowless rooms where light bends at the cracks of the door. I wonder what has brought me to this i wonder why i'm here. Somedays i sit for hours and others i dont sit at all so inconvinient is my thinking always pressuring myself to think to hard to over complicate to much to try to grasp the understandings of things i cannot yet understand. Silence like a disease swallows me whole and makes me quiver shake and tremble. Deep breathes drown out the suffacating sound of silence. Distant dreams that i ounce viewed lay scribbled out, erased, and lost. More dark more sitting more thinking, no more dreaming

SmurfyPoet292721's photo
Fri 12/12/08 12:55 PM
nice write flowerforyou

lancealot38's photo
Fri 12/12/08 01:06 PM
you've got a future as a writer man.stephen king won't live forever.that was pretty cool unless that's how you feel inside.if so, talk to someone before it's too late man.peace.

Brokenstings's photo
Fri 12/12/08 01:55 PM
thanks man no i'm not depressed i've just always been good at words and making them work together i appreciate your comment

Brokenstings's photo
Fri 12/12/08 01:57 PM
thank you