Go for it Allen *grin*



Drivin’ cross the miles of concrete dreams,
Got a sweet destination in mind,
he’s my road block,
my stop sign,
the one who makes me yield,
Makes me spin out so fast,
makes me squeal my hot rod wheels,
I’m driving cross the miles
to a pitstop so fine,
I’m going to see my baby,
I’m gonna make him mine~

I’m speed racing my way
down the black topped lure,
The lane my lover maps out
with his sweet talk pure,
I kick my pedal to the metal,
as I lightening speed my way,
I’m going to see my baby,
I’ll be getting there today~

I run on high octane jet fuel,
Engines filled with my desire,
He’s going to top my engine off,
with his sweet hot liquid fire,
That gearshift shoved in,
harsh and grinding all the way,
he’s going to fill my tanks,
with a card that’s been prepaid,
I’m gonna rack up the miles,
as I speed towards his warm smiles,
Hot rodding my chassis
with a cool quicksilver style,
I’m going to hand him my keys,
let him take me for a ride,
Say, baby you can drive my car~

I’m going to let him race my motor,
Get these engines revved up high, going to
Calibrate my timing with his warm breathed sigh,
Going to let him maneuver on my three point turn,
Gonna spin those wheels out with a slow hot burn,
He’s gonna check my traffic for it’s signals and signs,
We’re going to hear that roar,
as the engines whine,
and when my driver finally parks ,
in my designated spot,
we’re gonna let that ride cool down,
cause its running pretty hot,
I’ll let him gap and time my plugs,
Cause we’ve driven all this way,
then he’ll buff and wax my hood,
with a hot high powered spray..! Oh!!

Driving with the window down,
wind blowing in my face,
….Yeah! I’m going to see my baby,
and I’ll be getting there today~

Very nice!! I think Allen would do a great job with the music for it! It will make a great song!

Well, we'll see if it's up for it!

Ok, I hear this one with a warm but crunchy blues tone that starts off with a quick beat, some blues harp and an acoustic intro building throughout to a rising crescendo with orchestration(I'm thinking New York Philharmonic) and screaming guitar lead at the coda... I'm working on the fill-ins as we speak...Lemme print it out and I'll get busy...


Outstanding! btw

You can all just talk amongst yourselves while I craft up some deserving accompanyment to this piece... Kind'a tough, being how it's so dark in here and all but thanks for providing the guitar and the garage band program...

(dang'd popcorn kernals)

Ok, well here's where it stands...I've submitted and recieved approval from The Julliard, called several big name talents (well...their agents anyways) and I'm still waiting to hear from Ann & Nancy Wilson but Joan Jet says she's willing to give it a whack, since I explained how you are a "jet" and all...

Yep yep, definitely bluesy~I'm a blues girl you know...

Hurry up and get it written and sold and if you're a real good harum member I may let you out of that cage for a few minutes

I wanna hear you sing it!

yes, but will you let me drive your car? will ya? hmmmm?

I've read this before. I remember it because... it's my favorite poem you have written Ms Wiz.

<<------------will sing to the right tune

Oh thank you sweetie, I forgot how much you liked this one!

Can you afford the gas?