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written for a dear friend
In the night, quiet comes Not gently, but forcefully Forced on me by chance The circustance, you chose Asking why...knowing that I won't hear the answer I wish to receive and in Knowing this I grieve For the touch, the look The chances I took In free falling with you Checking my heart, yes Still there, as the air Escapes from my lips Your kiss but a sigh And still my mind Questions why Oh why? |
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Very beautiful
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love your stuff..... |
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Very beautiful Thank you itsybitty and I feel honored to be your first post. Welcome to our home. |
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written for a dear friend In the night, quiet comes Not gently, but forcefully Forced on me by chance The circustance, you chose Asking why...knowing that I won't hear the answer I wish to receive and in Knowing this I grieve For the touch, the look The chances I took In free falling with you Checking my heart, yes Still there, as the air Escapes from my lips Your kiss but a sigh And still my mind Questions why Oh why? All I can say is Wow! That is incredibly beautiful P. Every word permeates ~ mind, body, Spirit. Thank you for your write. It is pure gift |
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love your stuff..... you are too kind darkowl1 |
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Excellent!
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" the chances i took in free falling with you " is tearing my heart out!!!!
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very nice...
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written for a dear friend In the night, quiet comes Not gently, but forcefully Forced on me by chance The circustance, you chose Asking why...knowing that I won't hear the answer I wish to receive and in Knowing this I grieve For the touch, the look The chances I took In free falling with you Checking my heart, yes Still there, as the air Escapes from my lips Your kiss but a sigh And still my mind Questions why Oh why? All I can say is Wow! That is incredibly beautiful P. Every word permeates ~ mind, body, Spirit. Thank you for your write. It is pure gift my pleasure for such a wonderful spirit, a woman of true class -I am better for knowing you |
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Excellent! thanks J |
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These words reach out to me
"knowing that I won't hear the answer I wish to receive and in Knowing this I grieve" It would be so nice to hear the words we all long to hear at times. I read this more than once to really feel the impact these words carry. Thanks for sharing |
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" the chances i took in free falling with you " is tearing my heart out!!!! thanks for commenting enderra |
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very nice... hope you are well today kc |
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Thank you. I felt it all.
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These words reach out to me "knowing that I won't hear the answer I wish to receive and in Knowing this I grieve" It would be so nice to hear the words we all long to hear at times. I read this more than once to really feel the impact these words carry. Thanks for sharing It is in our nature to want questions answered, but with all our individual perceptions, the response offered isn't always what we hoped for. Thanks Ron. |
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((( P ))))
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Thank you. I felt it all. That's why I write-to feel. Thanks for commenting. |
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