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Topic: Her eyes
A64WOODY Joined Tue 03/04/08 Posts: 6830	Mon 12/08/08 10:02 PM
Sitting for hours looking so deep searching her soul to look in her eyes the truth is there as plain as day you know she's in love by the look in her eyes her heart is so full right to the brim you know she is happy by the look in her eyes the time that we spend together flies by and I know that it is right by the look in her eyes one day we will be old and we will be gray i'll know it was worth it by the look in her eyes jim/08

beautyfrompain Joined Wed 03/05/08 Posts: 4696	Mon 12/08/08 10:03 PM
How sweet and beautiful...

A64WOODY Joined Tue 03/04/08 Posts: 6830	Mon 12/08/08 10:05 PM
How sweet and beautiful...

WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Mon 12/08/08 10:08 PM
Very nice.

lilwick86 Joined Sun 11/23/08 Posts: 544	Mon 12/08/08 11:37 PM
That is very pretty, I really liked this poem, well done. It made me smile. Did you draw that picture in your avatar, if you did, it is very impressive, I haven't the nerve yet to draw one of the LOTR Characters, but I do paint alot of abstract paintings and am giving my counselor a rather large one I am almost done with. ok, just so you know, the love face with the heart eyes, is for the awesome drawing, i love art.

PKShimmer Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 259	Tue 12/09/08 02:28 AM
Very heartfelt

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 12/09/08 03:36 AM
{{{{{{WOODY}}}}}}......What a beautiful soul you have...thank you for sharing this with us. You have once again managed to bring tears to my eyes.....simply wonderful

A64WOODY Joined Tue 03/04/08 Posts: 6830	Tue 12/09/08 07:04 AM
{{{{{{WOODY}}}}}}......What a beautiful soul you have...thank you for sharing this with us. You have once again managed to bring tears to my eyes.....simply wonderful

feralcatlady Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 35491	Tue 12/09/08 07:06 AM
Do you people see why he is my favorite.....It's beautiful Woody your an amazing human being....I am honored to call you friend.

feralcatlady Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 35491	Tue 12/09/08 07:06 AM
Do you people see why he is my favorite.....It's beautiful Woody your an amazing human being....I am honored to call you friend.

A64WOODY Joined Tue 03/04/08 Posts: 6830	Tue 12/09/08 07:09 AM
That is very pretty, I really liked this poem, well done. It made me smile. Did you draw that picture in your avatar, if you did, it is very impressive, I haven't the nerve yet to draw one of the LOTR Characters, but I do paint alot of abstract paintings and am giving my counselor a rather large one I am almost done with. ok, just so you know, the love face with the heart eyes, is for the awesome drawing, i love art. I, unfortunately, do not have the ability to draw. I do, fortunatley, have the ability to copy and paste!! The poem is mine though and thank you!!

A64WOODY Joined Tue 03/04/08 Posts: 6830	Tue 12/09/08 07:09 AM
Do you people see why he is my favorite.....It's beautiful Woody your an amazing human being....I am honored to call you friend.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Tue 12/09/08 08:15 AM
So many things can be told by looking into the eyes good write.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 12/09/08 08:17 AM
very touching write

A64WOODY Joined Tue 03/04/08 Posts: 6830	Tue 12/09/08 08:24 AM
Thank you, Txs and pkd!

feralcatlady Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 35491	Tue 12/09/08 11:15 AM
The eyes are the windows to the soul....

A64WOODY Joined Tue 03/04/08 Posts: 6830	Tue 12/09/08 05:47 PM
The eyes are the windows to the soul.... Yes they are. One must be able to see what they are seeing when they look into them though.