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Topic: The Chill
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 12/02/08 09:59 AM
From the achives of long ago...... THE CHILL You step into the room and I hear the echo of your footsteps. Your meaning is understood. You could never say what your heart truly desired even though it was clearly on fire, for me, for us, for what we could be. Silence follows the echo. It always did. It always will. Sometimes silence envelops a chill. JDS 12/02/08

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 12/02/08 10:03 AM
a classic ...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 12/02/08 10:09 AM
a classic ... Ty Sweet (((J)))

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Tue 12/02/08 10:16 AM
Very nice write, (((Angel)))!! I love it!!

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 12/02/08 10:31 AM


AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 12/02/08 11:26 AM
Very nice write, (((Angel)))!! I love it!! Ty Red! Hope your Thanksgiving was peaceful

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 12/02/08 11:27 AM
K, you certainly know how to shower someone with Love

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 12/02/08 11:28 AM
Loving the Echo

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 12/02/08 11:53 AM
I had to print this out-it truly hit home for me. A great reminder to speak our minds even though we fear or dread the response.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Tue 12/02/08 01:03 PM
Very nice write, (((Angel)))!! I love it!! Ty Red! Hope your Thanksgiving was peaceful I went to my brothers!!

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Tue 12/02/08 01:04 PM
Hi ya, lovie!

Tuck4x4 Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 1077	Tue 12/02/08 01:09 PM
nice read, thank you

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 12/02/08 01:10 PM
K, you certainly know how to shower someone with Love Only when it is truly felt Sweetie

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 12/02/08 01:13 PM
in fear the ladder I chose to climb (near) leads to those I find dear head clear or hazy honestly honesty is trust and those close are amazing true love if ever there was amazing good friends laughing acknowledging now grasping over good times where relaxed is when and now

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 12/02/08 01:23 PM
in fear the ladder I chose to climb (near) leads to those I find dear head clear or hazy honestly honesty is trust and those close are amazing true love if ever there was amazing good friends laughing acknowledging now grasping over good times where relaxed is when and now

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 12/02/08 05:29 PM
never before a sound so sad as an echo returned in silence (taken from something i wrote last week) nice...nice...nice angel

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 12/02/08 06:09 PM
Loving the Echo D, no matter how short one of your responses may be, it is always so sweet! Ty!

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Tue 12/02/08 06:15 PM
From the achives of long ago...... THE CHILL You step into the room and I hear the echo of your footsteps. Your meaning is understood. You could never say what your heart truly desired even though it was clearly on fire, for me, for us, for what we could be. Silence follows the echo. It always did. It always will. Sometimes silence envelops a chill. JDS 12/02/08 Breathtakingly heartbreaking ~

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 12/02/08 06:16 PM
I had to print this out-it truly hit home for me. A great reminder to speak our minds even though we fear or dread the response. I'm honoured you did that (((P))) ~ so glad the write speaks to you!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 12/02/08 06:17 PM
Very nice write, (((Angel)))!! I love it!! Ty Red! Hope your Thanksgiving was peaceful I went to my brothers!! Sounds great Red! It's always wonderful to be surrounded by love whatever day of the year it is.