Topic: Bathing in Blue Light | |
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Water cascades at full volume
into a porcelain tub Like a waterfall falling from depths on high Crashing to pool in deep blue at my feet Deafening to drown out the sound of your voice Steam from the scalding water rises up covering me like a blanket to conceal my broken heart and the mirror streaked with condensation I do not look at myself in jagged pieces as I peel the ugliness of venomous words spewed from your sensual mouth That burned my clothes they lay crumpled upon the floor like discarded scraps of paper hearts a soul I immerse myself in water so hot it burns every feeling that I had for you out of my body to float like dead leaves upon a pond I scrub my skin in a futile attempt to make myself shine Beautiful but not in your eyes My beauty is hidden within your shadow I scrub to remove your rejection and the places that you have touched and it hurts Your ghost hovers in the corner out of the blue light and the reach of my grip out of sight of the prying eyes of the moon which stares down at my naked vulnerability and laughs I will remain in this cocoon of liquid self pity until I am cold shivering until your name has been erased from my lips and your face no longer haunts my dreams You have pulled me under and I sink like a stone...... |
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Edited by
darkowl1
on
Fri 11/28/08 02:03 AM
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BEAUTIFULLY DONE. |
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Thank you darkowl1 for reading this....
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well, it's really good!
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Thanks, I kinda dig it.....
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AMAZING WRITE!!! very powerful, I look forward to reading more from you.
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Thank you pkd1220 for reading this and for the comment.....
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Powerful for sure, well done, the very title is inspiring, very good. You get a thumbs up
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Thank you....
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