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Random thoughts running around,
In confusion they are bound Running my tired soul to the ground Thoughts of direction of my life Thoughts of my ex-wife Good thoughts and thoughts of strife They seem to me jumbled and confused Their meanings are misconstrued Some I wish I could exclude But they seem to stay No matter what, they don't go away Running around like children at play I want rid of the confusion I need to fix these contusions But I think that is living a delusion |
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Good write!
You don't need to get rid of them, acknowledge them, learn from them, grow from them... and then you will be able to get past them. 
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Good write!
You don't need to get rid of them, acknowledge them, learn from them, grow from them... and then you will be able to get past them.
thank you |
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nicely done
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nicely done
Thanks KC love your work too btw
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pieces of life
tossed like confetti finding their place again like water finding its level nice piece
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nicely done
Thanks KC love your work too btw
thank you for that |
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Good job, well done, awesome poem. Wow, so many talented people in here, wow, ya'll always amaze me, you rock!
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pieces of life tossed like confetti finding their place again like water finding its level nice piece
Did you just write that, like now, straight from your head? it good, I like it. Keep it up, nothing like a good spur of the moment poem to get the creative flow going. smiles 
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pieces of life tossed like confetti finding their place again like water finding its level nice piece
Did you just write that, like now, straight from your head? it good, I like it. Keep it up, nothing like a good spur of the moment poem to get the creative flow going. smiles
thank you...I write poetry and prose sometimes ... it all comes out like I talk ... the words have to 'feel' right ...
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