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Topic: Masking Scars
invisible Joined Mon 04/09/07 Posts: 7692	Thu 11/20/08 07:52 AM


LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 11/20/08 07:56 AM
Hello Beautiful you,, Have I told ya lately how much I miss you,,, I so do,,, Love to you Strength for a better today and most of all a gentle Kiss upon your cheek to remind you, you are so loved

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Thu 11/20/08 09:20 PM


ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Thu 11/20/08 09:20 PM Edited by ArtGurl on Thu 11/20/08 09:43 PM
feeling you beauty Note to self: never underestimate the value of duct tape

PacificStar48 Joined Tue 10/02/07 Posts: 13764	Thu 11/20/08 09:34 PM
Women Made from silk Fine weaving of threads Scent of Rose’s upon the flesh Born to explore life and all its beauty Flowing outstretched hands Enveloping Love and Tears Birthing a Creation so pure Yet Sickness plagues her Reality Emptiness fills her world Taking my choice to choose Leaving questions and worry Damaged deep within the womb Bandages hiding, Masking only what the eye can see Plagued, her center Healing She finds Comfort Wheather experience or talent this is incredibly good writing. Perhaps you have found a way to be rebirthed as a great writer. I think so.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 11/21/08 10:24 AM
feeling you beauty Note to self: never underestimate the value of duct tape Hmmmmmmm duct tape,, Yes so loving you beautiful

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 11/21/08 10:26 AM
Women Made from silk Fine weaving of threads Scent of Rose’s upon the flesh Born to explore life and all its beauty Flowing outstretched hands Enveloping Love and Tears Birthing a Creation so pure Yet Sickness plagues her Reality Emptiness fills her world Taking my choice to choose Leaving questions and worry Damaged deep within the womb Bandages hiding, Masking only what the eye can see Plagued, her center Healing She finds Comfort Wheather experience or talent this is incredibly good writing. Perhaps you have found a way to be rebirthed as a great writer. I think so. Thank you so much for your kind words,, I would have to say this is my life a continue-ouuuus re-birth Blessings to you Ms Star

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Fri 11/21/08 10:27 AM
feeling you beauty Note to self: never underestimate the value of duct tape Hmmmmmmm duct tape,, Yes so loving you beautiful love you

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 11/22/08 08:43 AM
A beautiful creature Created by God, from Adam's rib, Yet, never to wear a mask Except for what God hid. Once the mask had been removed And she saw all of God's wonder, Though they were shunned from the garden Because of her blunder. But nevertheless, May the mask never be worn, For it hides her identity For whom she was born. Women never take the time To see their inner beauty God gave, Because what's on the outside Was the disguise he saved.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 11/22/08 12:25 PM
A beautiful creature Created by God, from Adam's rib, Yet, never to wear a mask Except for what God hid. Once the mask had been removed And she saw all of God's wonder, Though they were shunned from the garden Because of her blunder. But nevertheless, May the mask never be worn, For it hides her identity For whom she was born. Women never take the time To see their inner beauty God gave, Because what's on the outside Was the disguise he saved.

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Sat 11/22/08 12:45 PM
A beautiful creature Created by God, from Adam's rib, Yet, never to wear a mask Except for what God hid. Once the mask had been removed And she saw all of God's wonder, Though they were shunned from the garden Because of her blunder. But nevertheless, May the mask never be worn, For it hides her identity For whom she was born. Women never take the time To see their inner beauty God gave, Because what's on the outside Was the disguise he saved.

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Sat 11/22/08 12:53 PM
A beautiful creature Created by God, from Adam's rib, Yet, never to wear a mask Except for what God hid. Once the mask had been removed And she saw all of God's wonder, Though they were shunned from the garden Because of her blunder. But nevertheless, May the mask never be worn, For it hides her identity For whom she was born. Women never take the time To see their inner beauty God gave, Because what's on the outside Was the disguise he saved. But what is on the in inside is who she is. She knows this. As time wears on she identifies the interself as the person she has become. The heart of a women :) Man need that :)God made if for him to find. Look for the heart :)

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Sat 11/22/08 12:55 PM
There lies true happiness

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 11/22/08 08:25 PM
A beautiful creature Created by God, from Adam's rib, Yet, never to wear a mask Except for what God hid. Once the mask had been removed And she saw all of God's wonder, Though they were shunned from the garden Because of her blunder. But nevertheless, May the mask never be worn, For it hides her identity For whom she was born. Women never take the time To see their inner beauty God gave, Because what's on the outside Was the disguise he saved. But what is on the in inside is who she is. She knows this. As time wears on she identifies the interself as the person she has become. The heart of a women :) Man need that :)God made if for him to find. Look for the heart :) Excuse me Carol I assume....but if you read into it like I was intending for it to be read, you would see that I was not meaning for it to be sarcastic. Yes, God put true beauty on the outside for men to admire, but the real beauty lies on the inside is what I was referring too. I have had girlfriends, wives and friends, that belittle themselves because they swear up and down that they are not beautiful. I always begged to differ with them because they do not see what I see and if they looked towards their inner-self, they would see they are more beautiful than Miss America or any Centerfold would ever think of being. That was the message I was displaying in that write. God forbid if I should write anything else.

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Sun 11/23/08 12:45 AM
A beautiful creature Created by God, from Adam's rib, Yet, never to wear a mask Except for what God hid. Once the mask had been removed And she saw all of God's wonder, Though they were shunned from the garden Because of her blunder. But nevertheless, May the mask never be worn, For it hides her identity For whom she was born. Women never take the time To see their inner beauty God gave, Because what's on the outside Was the disguise he saved. But what is on the in inside is who she is. She knows this. As time wears on she identifies the interself as the person she has become. The heart of a women :) Man need that :)God made if for him to find. Look for the heart :) Excuse me Carol I assume....but if you read into it like I was intending for it to be read, you would see that I was not meaning for it to be sarcastic. Yes, God put true beauty on the outside for men to admire, but the real beauty lies on the inside is what I was referring too. I have had girlfriends, wives and friends, that belittle themselves because they swear up and down that they are not beautiful. I always begged to differ with them because they do not see what I see and if they looked towards their inner-self, they would see they are more beautiful than Miss America or any Centerfold would ever think of being. That was the message I was displaying in that write. God forbid if I should write anything else. That was a very good write. You are so very right. The true beauty is on the inside of a person, if people would take time to search out the beauty that God has placed there,

lilwick86 Joined Sun 11/23/08 Posts: 544	Sun 11/23/08 12:48 AM
smile, goodone

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Sun 11/23/08 08:48 AM
A beautiful creature Created by God, from Adam's rib, Yet, never to wear a mask Except for what God hid. Once the mask had been removed And she saw all of God's wonder, Though they were shunned from the garden Because of her blunder. But nevertheless, May the mask never be worn, For it hides her identity For whom she was born. Women never take the time To see their inner beauty God gave, Because what's on the outside Was the disguise he saved. But what is on the in inside is who she is. She knows this. As time wears on she identifies the interself as the person she has become. The heart of a women :) Man need that :)God made if for him to find. Look for the heart :) Excuse me Carol I assume....but if you read into it like I was intending for it to be read, you would see that I was not meaning for it to be sarcastic. Yes, God put true beauty on the outside for men to admire, but the real beauty lies on the inside is what I was referring too. I have had girlfriends, wives and friends, that belittle themselves because they swear up and down that they are not beautiful. I always begged to differ with them because they do not see what I see and if they looked towards their inner-self, they would see they are more beautiful than Miss America or any Centerfold would ever think of being. That was the message I was displaying in that write. God forbid if I should write anything else. I agree :) No you didn't. Just hope they find that out before it is to late best to enjoy life. Interbeauty is most important. These were my thought that popped out after reading :) It is sad that us who don't look like models can be unhappy with ones self. The scares on the first write for me are from the journey though life :) no one is without one way or another.

mg1959 Joined Thu 04/05/07 Posts: 7872	Mon 11/24/08 12:39 AM
Bless you Denise

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 11/30/08 09:13 PM
Bless you Denise Bless you Michael Carol, Flame, lil Robert I so understood

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 11/30/08 09:29 PM
invisible....how perfect for D....ty for posting that!