Topic: For all that have loved and lost. | |
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I stand alone on a distant clif lisening to your voice on the wind.
I look to the seting sun only to see your face, a thought of what was befor the fall. A tear falls to join the salty waves below. I let the clif fall away, a thought only for a moment..of what was what could have been (love and life after it)but not for me. As I crash beneath the waves and fall to the ocan floor my hart beat stops my breath on more, so this is what is ment for me forever lost to the sea. please do not mind any spelling that is not right. And thank you for reading. |
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Very nice...I can relate to it
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thank you.
I hope others can to |
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Really nice
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Very nice, well written (despite spelling)
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I was always wondering Why is that a sea or an Ocean or basicaly any
water bodies are choosen as a places for sorrow and tears? Just look in all World literature. What kind of magnetis water has over our minds? Though sometimes Mountains are choosen for the same emotional relief .... Nature? It was written with passion. Thanks for sharing :^) |
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most wellcome. and to anser the question it is becouse it is deep and
dark and full of all things from the mind and soul that cant be seen, only felt. |
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Head or Heart
There is no connection Between my head and my fingers. While my heart was happy It shouted out loud And fingers flew over the keyboard, Producing verses of happiness. Now that my heart is broken My head rules And my fingers are mute Things that were important before Don’t seem to matter anymore. |
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The Sailing by Bobby7 I sail on; upon this endless sea, with no one here to comfort me I sail on; my body slaves, to conquer these forbidding waves I sail on; to places I must find , to free my tired and tortured mind I sail on; to that elusive goal, in hope to cleanse my troubled soul.. I sail on; the sea's become my home, it seems to sense that I'm alone I sail on; to where my heart can thrive, and remind me that I'm still alive I sail on; ships pass me in the night.I can't be seen, I run no light I sail on; and see the rising sun, and know my journey's almost done I sail on; and as the storm clouds part, I find the harbour of your heart I sail no more! My sailing's done!..And you and I are now as one! |
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thank all that have looked at my poem and I hope you take something from
it. be well and be safe. |
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