Topic: You said, "Walk with me." | |
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You walked behind me
tripping me as we went for kicks you chose to stay behind so you could watch where I was going and you told me I was the one who held the hand of the fate that you served so hot and so fresh with insults and rapture burning my soul but what you want isn't peace but something deep like a tigers eye you want to fly but your so deep and low sometimes I think you lost control of what you knew was right I don't want to be your project of rejection on sight and I don't think you know what the pain seems to know as well as you grow in the shadows of rezentful minds cause I held the twig and you burned it in my hand but what would a simple woman do If she couldn't read your thoughts as well as you read like the dead and fresh memories of yesterday and I don't want to be your little plaything and your so intent on focusing does it hurt does it live like ice does it penetrate your every hour your every vice, you could never play nice, and I smile just a bit at the thought as you stop and stare at me such greedy eyes you have like a mind sucker oh what a surprise, yet your ever so wise, crooked smile, crooked lips, crooked lies, you don't even leave me room to sigh you never had faith in me, it was only my tears you wanted to taste, a fragment of the woman I had become the woman you couldn't bare me to be now, I mean, why should I have it so 'easy' afterall, doesn't pathos have a meaning for you too afterall, lets say we dance here, twiging and twining little drops of blood dew on your insanity, your games, why not twist the sinew of your unforgiven heart, so we can finally catch it, right where you are, and so you attack, and the fear is the only thing that screams cause I don't live here where you can find me anymore Beware the one who walks with you, what a burden it is, to carry the vampire of despair and sorrow and regret upon your shoulders it isn't that he is never satisfied, its just that he will take you with him deep and deeper still if the taste of your sorrow, is more than he can live without, and more than you can let go.... |
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Wow.... Nice creative peice of writting poem
You walked behind me tripping me as we went for kicks you chose to stay behind so you could watch where I was going and you told me I was the one who held the hand of the fate that you served so hot and so fresh with insults and rapture burning my soul but what you want isn't peace but something deep like a tigers eye you want to fly but your so deep and low sometimes I think you lost control of what you knew was right I don't want to be your project of rejection on sight and I don't think you know what the pain seems to know as well as you grow in the shadows of rezentful minds cause I held the twig and you burned it in my hand but what would a simple woman do If she couldn't read your thoughts as well as you read like the dead and fresh memories of yesterday and I don't want to be your little plaything and your so intent on focusing does it hurt does it live like ice does it penetrate your every hour your every vice, you could never play nice, and I smile just a bit at the thought as you stop and stare at me such greedy eyes you have like a mind sucker oh what a surprise, yet your ever so wise, crooked smile, crooked lips, crooked lies, you don't even leave me room to sigh you never had faith in me, it was only my tears you wanted to taste, a fragment of the woman I had become the woman you couldn't bare me to be now, I mean, why should I have it so 'easy' afterall, doesn't pathos have a meaning for you too afterall, lets say we dance here, twiging and twining little drops of blood dew on your insanity, your games, why not twist the sinew of your unforgiven heart, so we can finally catch it, right where you are, and so you attack, and the fear is the only thing that screams cause I don't live here where you can find me anymore Beware the one who walks with you, what a burden it is, to carry the vampire of despair and sorrow and regret upon your shoulders it isn't that he is never satisfied, its just that he will take you with him deep and deeper still if the taste of your sorrow, is more than he can live without, and more than you can let go.... |
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Wow.... Nice creative peice of writting poem Thank you, smiles You walked behind me tripping me as we went for kicks you chose to stay behind so you could watch where I was going and you told me I was the one who held the hand of the fate that you served so hot and so fresh with insults and rapture burning my soul but what you want isn't peace but something deep like a tigers eye you want to fly but your so deep and low sometimes I think you lost control of what you knew was right I don't want to be your project of rejection on sight and I don't think you know what the pain seems to know as well as you grow in the shadows of rezentful minds cause I held the twig and you burned it in my hand but what would a simple woman do If she couldn't read your thoughts as well as you read like the dead and fresh memories of yesterday and I don't want to be your little plaything and your so intent on focusing does it hurt does it live like ice does it penetrate your every hour your every vice, you could never play nice, and I smile just a bit at the thought as you stop and stare at me such greedy eyes you have like a mind sucker oh what a surprise, yet your ever so wise, crooked smile, crooked lips, crooked lies, you don't even leave me room to sigh you never had faith in me, it was only my tears you wanted to taste, a fragment of the woman I had become the woman you couldn't bare me to be now, I mean, why should I have it so 'easy' afterall, doesn't pathos have a meaning for you too afterall, lets say we dance here, twiging and twining little drops of blood dew on your insanity, your games, why not twist the sinew of your unforgiven heart, so we can finally catch it, right where you are, and so you attack, and the fear is the only thing that screams cause I don't live here where you can find me anymore Beware the one who walks with you, what a burden it is, to carry the vampire of despair and sorrow and regret upon your shoulders it isn't that he is never satisfied, its just that he will take you with him deep and deeper still if the taste of your sorrow, is more than he can live without, and more than you can let go.... |
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very powerful write...I'm still thinking
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Fantastic write ... a powerful look at shadow
I am disappointed the read is over so soon ... |
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Fantastic write ... a powerful look at shadow I am disappointed the read is over so soon ... The continuation ... was to indicate that struggles continue as they always do, sort of an emfasis on the continuation of life. |
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