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![]() Quiet night's rain Opens cacophony Orchestra of bees |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am on a roll ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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![]() Liquid fire flows Mirrored water reflection Kaleidoscope You got it, you really got it, oh man hey folks never say no to this gal! ![]() Hey, how's you today? I'm hoping the image shows, you may remember it ( if it does) ![]() |
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visual instinct
photograph inspiration making her paint words |
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firery green orb
drawing me into the cold heat afire with envy |
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Vicki!
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't seen you for ages! How are you? I didn't write this but I love it (it's from Fight Club) Worker bees can leave Even drones can fly away The Queen is their slave |
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firery green orb drawing me into the cold heat afire with envy Good to see you V and splendid you could join in the Ku-For-All ![]() |
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Nice to see you both Bonny and Pete!
From within my mind I fight to gain total freedom My insanity |
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Storm has passed
Sailing in quiet water again Moving at last ![]() |
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Storm has passed Sailing in quiet water again Moving at last ![]() SUPERB! |
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diver japonaise
sliding deep beneath the blue finds oyster's secret |
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Edited by
BonnyMiss
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Wed 11/05/08 12:24 PM
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![]() Liquid fire flows Mirrored water reflection Kaleidoscope You got it, you really got it, oh man hey folks never say no to this gal! ![]() Hey, how's you today? I'm hoping the image shows, you may remember it ( if it does) ![]() |
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![]() Crinoline ladies Victorian modesty Shallow Socialite |
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Running with the dogs
I've become an animal Inhibitions gone |
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Reaching for the sky
I wished upon a lone Star May my dreams come true |
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I was told by a haiku master I suck at the ku's. he writes 100 a day. So if that is any indication of my ku ness, I'm not sure I should participate. :(
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I was told by a haiku master I suck at the ku's. he writes 100 a day. So if that is any indication of my ku ness, I'm not sure I should participate. :( Balls to that "master"! If you like what you write that's all that matters ![]() |
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Well, thank you for your comment, perhaps I shall try once again, now if someone will please refresh my memory as to the proper syllable count, it is 5-7-5 is it not?
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Yep, that's it.
Please do try again, the more the merrier ![]() |
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I would like to ask another question, how did you get those pictures into the reply? I would like to post a pic with my response.
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