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Topic: Nightmare
nicutoo Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 5	Mon 10/27/08 01:38 PM
Nightmare Shaking, Twisting and Turning Waking up from a horrible Dream My insides Tingling and Churning The only sound is my own Scream Echoing in an empty house, wall to Wall My eye’s quickly open as I reach Out The echo still ricocheting down the Hall Suddenly I realize I am falling, no Doubt Since all there is to grasp is empty Air When I Wake up without you There The sound of reality is what I Hear Missing the one for whom I truly Care

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 10/27/08 01:55 PM
cool

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 10/27/08 08:23 PM
very nice!

nicutoo Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 5	Tue 10/28/08 02:12 PM
Thanks d4tc and MirrorMirror

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 10/28/08 05:03 PM
Poignant. Excellent write....truly heartfelt

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Tue 10/28/08 05:14 PM
Great write dude i liked it very much..

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