Topic: inside joke
enderra's photo
Mon 10/27/08 01:36 PM
Speak to me
I want that exquisite pain biting through me
like the last cord of Beetoven"s "patheique"
given voice

Look at me
I want the elongated agony of
your hearts transparency

Hold me
I want the tight torture in skin
brazen with certainty


d4tc's photo
Mon 10/27/08 08:20 PM
Holding you
Something a good man
was born to do

Looking at you
your words
string the song
sewing this vision
through

Speaking to you
eating up this poem
I smile
while I chew

flowerforyou

Nice Write enderra

enderra's photo
Tue 10/28/08 05:39 AM
thank youflowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Tue 10/28/08 07:19 AM
Edited by s1owhand on Tue 10/28/08 07:20 AM
"certainly, i like that" flowerforyou bigsmile

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 10/28/08 08:36 AM

Speak to me
I want that exquisite pain biting through me
like the last cord of Beetoven"s "patheique"
given voice

Look at me
I want the elongated agony of
your hearts transparency

Hold me
I want the tight torture in skin
brazen with certainty




A lone voice cries out in the dark, only those with a "special" gift of hearing will understand................. flowerforyou