Topic: ~As I lay here~
Hawaiian76's photo
Mon 04/02/07 04:47 PM
As I lay here quietly
this room feels so empty,
I know I'll see you again
and I know what we'll be,
I love you baby
and I always will,
even after
our hearts stand still,
We may be young
we may be wreckless,
but my love for you
you should never second guess,
after I met you that first time
I knew that we would click,
as for those nights you don't feel well
or those nights you just feel sick,
I'll sit at the edge of your bed
the bed in which you lay,
I'll stay right beside you
until every strand of hair fades to grey.

We stand in the cold and say our goodbyes
but when our lips touch I'm locked in an everlasting bliss,
all because of you and your tender kiss,
you steal my heart every single day
and you can't even see,
it's the small things you do
that make me fall in love with you.

LAMom's photo
Mon 04/02/07 04:52 PM
Incredible,,, The women who holds the key to your
heart is and will be truly blessedflowerforyou

Hawaiian76's photo
Mon 04/02/07 04:56 PM
Actually I'm single...I write about the girl of my dreams :D

sillysammie's photo
Mon 04/02/07 05:01 PM
holy moly that's so sweet! i love how you said you write about the girl
of your dreams! Not many guys can actually say that and not revert back
to living in the 'now' if you get what i'm sayin...

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 04/02/07 06:21 PM
very nice poem keep up the good work and post more.flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 04/02/07 09:52 PM
That is just so beautiful flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou
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Gryphyn's photo
Mon 04/02/07 11:34 PM
Nice to see you writing of the dreams. I did that for a very long time,
and it paid off in :heart: s. I met her here and one of these days we
wont be flying across the country anymore. I know you will find her if
you never stop dreaming.

:wink:

G