Topic: i loved you to pieces...
pepper80's photo
Sun 10/19/08 05:42 AM
Always and forever
I promised to you
I'll hand you my heart
Of black and blue

I'll give you the night
Every diamond and star
Any treasure you want
It won't matter how far

I'll build you a castle
Away from all else
With nobody around
Just you and myself

I'd fill it with mirrors
To show you your face
This beauty I've found
Reflecting your grace

And at night in our bed
I would kiss you so softly
With every breath of pleasure
I'd take over your body

I'd confine you to me
With the finest red ribbon
I'd watch you all day
This prize I've been given

You're my favorite thing
And I won't give you up
Not even for sunlight
And the warmth of its touch

Your eyes screamed to me
I had sewn shut your mouth
You were starting to cry
I won't let you out

I unlocked the chains
That would bind you forever
Your body was shaking
Blood poured as I severed

We'll last for eternity
Within my own reason
You heart's in a jar
I loved you to pieces...pitchfork

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Sun 10/19/08 05:56 AM
great twist, fatal attraction plus onebigsmile flowerforyou
welcome to the poetry and creative writing forum

tanyaann's photo
Sun 10/19/08 06:08 AM
flowerforyou nice write!

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 10/19/08 07:46 AM
Thank you for sharing this one is was originally is

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justmehere03's photo
Sun 10/19/08 07:49 AM
awesome!