Topic: i kissed an angel
pepper80's photo
Sat 10/18/08 07:27 PM
I kissed an angel
And stood in awe and wonder
at perfection revealed
His purity burnt my corrupt flesh
His innocence astounded me
Every touch struck a crushing blow
As he brought shame to my empty heart

Loveless I played
and tried to discover the passion I should feel
But there was nothing
But bitter twisted thoughts
I, the devils whore
and He an angel sent from God
I reached up but never touched him
Dazzled by his purity
I once knew, but have long forgotten

The stark brightness of his naivety
shows every stain of my imperfection
Displays my impending condemnation
And as this angel loves
I flee
Ashamed of who I am
Terrified I may destroy this angel
or destroy myself

I desire to love but have no heart
So I return to the shadows
The darkness where I hide my bloodstained flesh
Leaving you to stand in the light, where you belong
To embrace your 'forever after' dreams
which have been banished from my soul


d4tc's photo
Sat 10/18/08 10:06 PM
Very nice. flowerforyou

Nova86's photo
Sat 10/18/08 10:09 PM
i really liked it....deep and meaningful....good writeflowerforyou

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Sun 10/19/08 04:05 AM
:cry: flowerforyou nice write. one day someone will touch your soul and you will regain what you have lost drinker

pepper80's photo
Sun 10/19/08 05:31 AM
highly unlikely...:cry:

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Sun 10/19/08 06:00 AM
great writing:smile:

jimz's photo
Sun 10/19/08 02:22 PM
cool

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Sun 10/19/08 03:26 PM
Edited by Unknow on Sun 10/19/08 03:28 PM

highly unlikely...:cry:

:cry: ............
But you never know what tomorrow might bring :heart: Sorry not trying to upset you just like to see everybody be happy