Topic: October Dream
s1owhand's photo
Sun 10/12/08 02:09 AM
trying uselessly to awake from fruitless slumber
doomed
age relentlessly
pruning
as youth's water leaves
death
your nothingness vanishes
this is your real dream

a taste of amber October wine
poured from bony fingers
through a slit neck
coating the vessel
a tiny pool
at the bottom of the goblet
the searching tongue
shockingly long
strains
to reach a droplet of nirvana
in vain frustration
in dessication

daylight says
shimmer hot airwave
that's all
darkness is coming
daily
beautiful cold
sucking the mirage away
acres of gravestones
testify
courting your
appeal

chevylover1965's photo
Sun 10/12/08 02:12 AM
drinker not bad !

BonnyMiss's photo
Sun 10/12/08 02:20 AM
s1ow............. Perfection as usual. flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Sun 10/12/08 02:27 AM
waving chevy and bonny waving
DeathsTreaty put me in a mood

ArtGurl's photo
Sun 10/12/08 08:51 AM
...that's on a slow simmer ... allowing the flavours to combine into a rich soup ... mmm mmmm good bigsmile



no photo
Sun 10/12/08 11:24 AM
Tantalizingly intense..a heady intoxication!!

myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 10/12/08 11:52 AM
:heart: :heart: (((Harold))) flowerforyou

Jess642's photo
Sun 10/12/08 01:37 PM
ohwell

Ouch!

and thankyouflowerforyou