Topic: -The Devils Kiss-
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Sat 10/11/08 09:21 PM

Addicted,crank,the devils kiss
Lingering on her lips
Pressing the needle against her skin, slipping it into her vein
That familiar comforting pinch as it breaks through the skin
The burn as she depresses the plunger
Hitting the blood stream
Traveling now through out her body, hitting her brain
Numbing and forgetting all the pain
The devils kiss lingering on her lips
Eyes roll back, her body goes slack
Spittle turns to drool
Spilling from her mouth
Too pure, too much, now her heart stops
Last breath slips from her lungs
Her body grows cold and stiff
She just had to have one last devils kiss
Forever it will linger upon her lips

directandwrite's photo
Sat 10/11/08 09:32 PM
Whoa, powerful imagery...

s1owhand's photo
Sun 10/12/08 02:21 AM
great kiss flowerforyou

the painless exit
governmental style
legal in 36 states
kiss me now
devil

devil

BonnyMiss's photo
Sun 10/12/08 02:25 AM
Very good write, funny what addiction does to a person's soul

ArtGurl's photo
Sun 10/12/08 08:31 AM
powerful and tragic .... shining light in the shadows you are ... it is your gift ... one among many ... flowerforyou :heart: