Topic: I cannot write the stupid thing.
sweetfireice's photo
Sat 10/11/08 07:39 PM
It did not matter
that I was beautiful
It did not matter
that I was compassionate
reaching into the depths
of my humanity

It is not enough to be a woman
not enough to value what is good
to find myself alone and surfacing
I am certain that I loved
I'm not so certain
that you get what you give
some days it is my face only
that preserves me

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 10/11/08 07:47 PM
Very powerful!

Welcome flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Sat 10/11/08 07:51 PM
flowerforyou

it takes two. two it takes.
burning to consume each other
a shower of sparks on wet tinder
fizzling smoke
but no flames

sweetfireice's photo
Sat 10/11/08 07:57 PM

Very powerful!

Welcome flowerforyou


Thank you:smile:

sweetfireice's photo
Sat 10/11/08 07:59 PM

flowerforyou

it takes two. two it takes.
burning to consume each other
a shower of sparks on wet tinder
fizzling smoke
but no flames



I'll think about it. I presume there's not too many slowhands.

kc0003's photo
Sat 10/11/08 08:01 PM
nicely done

welcome to the circus... :banana:


waving

flowerforyou

beauty314's photo
Sat 10/11/08 08:10 PM
awesomeflowerforyou

no photo
Sat 10/11/08 09:00 PM
sleeping with the mirror
skim cross every angle
watching as the light goes out
fair warning
to be stilll
awake again
little child
grown woman
choose your fill

no photo
Sat 10/11/08 09:20 PM
Welcome....very powerful words there

sweetfireice's photo
Sun 10/12/08 06:58 PM
Thank you everyone for the re-welcome.drinker

no photo
Mon 10/13/08 06:41 AM
powerful write, great endingflowerforyou flowerforyou