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ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 10/06/08 09:13 AM
i eat an orange in my shuffling slumber i recall to wake missing the sound of your beat this next day is every day apart from you no city street dirty club racquet ball all the shops in the world make sound enough in these moments i dont slip just shuffle along missing your beat.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 10/06/08 09:41 AM
I like very much. Why at night does the longing feel stronger?

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 10/06/08 09:54 AM
i think its the early morning

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Mon 10/06/08 09:56 AM


pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 10/06/08 10:37 AM
i think its the early morning you are right, but I call it night because I think I'm suppose to be sleeping. I think I have my nights and days mixed up

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 10/06/08 10:50 AM
this Cut a rug peel a banana I'm a bad bad mma mma jaa mma please don't move me when on camera I'm a bad bad mma mma jaa mma

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 10/06/08 11:16 AM
is there but any other question in my life, will d4tc wait for me to finish medical school

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 10/06/08 11:16 AM
i think its the early morning you are right, but I call it night because I think I'm suppose to be sleeping. I think I have my nights and days mixed up those hours can be refreshing as an orangey

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 10/06/08 03:23 PM Edited by s1owhand on Mon 10/06/08 03:25 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aOJE0u2uO4Y&feature=related

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 10/06/08 03:48 PM
yay haven't watched yet, but speaking on certainty...

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 10/06/08 03:52 PM


ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 10/06/08 04:00 PM
see, there are some things id never know without a s1owhand

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 10/06/08 04:02 PM
this Cut a rug peel a banana I'm a bad bad mma mma jaa mma please don't move me when on camera I'm a bad bad mma mma jaa mma i love this cut a rug ((((d4tc)))))

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 10/06/08 04:02 PM
hi miskim

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 10/06/08 05:01 PM
Down d4tc down lol

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 10/06/08 05:09 PM
i dont know why http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8vHoj-PBGzs&feature=related

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 10/06/08 05:10 PM
Down d4tc down lol i don't need to drink

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Tue 10/07/08 03:54 AM
Down d4tc down lol i don't need to drink I don't understand what this means. I don't drink i haven't drank for 20 some years.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 10/07/08 05:34 AM
i eat an orange in my shuffling slumber i recall to wake missing the sound of your beat this next day is every day apart from you no city street dirty club racquet ball all the shops in the world make sound enough in these moments i dont slip just shuffle along missing your beat. "missing the sound of your beat this next day is every day apart from you" Sooooo beautifully stated Very nice write!!

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Tue 10/07/08 08:22 AM
Down d4tc down lol i don't need to drink I don't understand what this means. I don't drink i haven't drank for 20 some years. we have fun.