Topic: A LOOK SO DEEP
shybubba's photo
Sat 10/04/08 08:54 AM
I SEE YOU STANDING THERE
A LOOK SO DEEP IN YOUR EYES
THE WAY YOURE LOOKING AT ME
CATCHES ME BY SURPRISE
I WALK OVER TO YOU
MOVE IN FROM BEHIND
I PUT MY ARM AROUND YOU
PULL YOU CLOSE IN TO ME
AND BRUSH YOUR HAIR TO THE SIDE
I WHISPER IN YOUR EAR
AND KISS YOU ON THE NECK
YOU TURN YOURSELF AROUND
AND PUT YOUR ARMS AROUND ME TIGHT
YOU TELL ME TO QUIT TALKING
AND TO HOLD YOU LOVINGLY
FOR THE REST OF THE NIGHT


im not sure if this one is finished...it sure seems like it could go farther....lol

lurchs_sister's photo
Sat 10/04/08 08:56 AM
This is great... leaves me wanting more... reminds me of those thoughts that I just keep to myself and sometimes just trail off into nothingness

no photo
Sat 10/04/08 09:15 AM
Nice....can't wait for the continuationflowerforyou