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Topic: A VISION
luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Sat 10/04/08 12:06 AM
A VISION Your a vision of fire, a spark of light, you take me so much higher, on this endless flight. You a beautiful journey, a passionate kiss, when you turn to me, and look at me, just like this. Your a precious treasure, a dream come true, a boundless pleasure, is wrapped up in you. Your a sparkling sunset, a glowing full moon, the love I could never get, and not a moment too soon. Your the reoccuring dream, the one I cant forget, the love so extreme, that leaves me breathless, and wet. your everything ive ever wanted, and all that I could need, and now that I have found you, im following your lead. Your everything thats right, and all I wished you'de be, thank you for this love, its truely set me free. by Roberta Murdock 10/04/08

doodlebuggrrl Joined Wed 04/30/08 Posts: 593	Sat 10/04/08 12:07 AM
A VISION Your a vision of fire, a spark of light, you take me so much higher, on this endless flight. You a beautiful journey, a passionate kiss, when you turn to me, and look at me, just like this. Your a precious treasure, a dream come true, a boundless pleasure, is wrapped up in you. Your a sparkling sunset, a glowing full moon, the love I could never get, and not a moment too soon. Your the reoccuring dream, the one I cant forget, the love so extreme, that leaves me breathless, and wet. your everything ive ever wanted, and all that I could need, and now that I have found you, im following your lead. Your everything thats right, and all I wished you'de be, thank you for this love, its truely set me free. by Roberta Murdock 10/04/08 You're so freaking cool!!

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Sat 10/04/08 12:18 AM
You're so freaking cool!! Awwww babe...so are you!

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Havaman Joined Sun 08/03/08 Posts: 426	Sat 10/04/08 09:41 AM
Roberta.. Your emotions are intense... your expressions of them.... beautiful and delightful Wonderful Wonderful Wonderful

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 10/04/08 09:51 AM
Great job ....I really like your flow and style. Ty for sharing such a beautiful write

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 10/04/08 10:37 AM


luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Sat 10/04/08 10:54 AM
Roberta.. Your emotions are intense... your expressions of them.... beautiful and delightful Wonderful Wonderful Wonderful Nice.

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Sat 10/04/08 10:54 AM
Great job ....I really like your flow and style. Ty for sharing such a beautiful write Thats so cool..thanks.

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Sat 10/04/08 10:55 AM
You know it feels so good to write these poems...it really rocks that you guys get some joy from them too.. It really does!!!!!!!!

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Sat 10/04/08 12:31 PM
I guess I dont need to tell you ive found some new inspirtion lately...yeah he rockssssssss!!!!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 10/04/08 12:33 PM
I guess I dont need to tell you ive found some new inspirtion lately...yeah he rockssssssss!!!! Wonderful!!!!!!!! Congrats woman

shadowdog Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 12773	Sat 10/04/08 07:36 PM
wow--cool reading---

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 10/04/08 07:51 PM
A VISION Your a vision of fire, a spark of light, you take me so much higher, on this endless flight. You a beautiful journey, a passionate kiss, when you turn to me, and look at me, just like this. Your a precious treasure, a dream come true, a boundless pleasure, is wrapped up in you. Your a sparkling sunset, a glowing full moon, the love I could never get, and not a moment too soon. Your the reoccuring dream, the one I cant forget, the love so extreme, that leaves me breathless, and wet. your everything ive ever wanted, and all that I could need, and now that I have found you, im following your lead. Your everything thats right, and all I wished you'de be, thank you for this love, its truely set me free. by Roberta Murdock 10/04/08 This write of fire and flame. Makes me feel life's such a shame. For in your mind its not my name. That has you off on this beautiful flight. Longing for him each and every night. Rock&roll this is a very cool write. Wink. I hope you have found a very special dude. Who will love ya and never be rude.

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Mon 10/06/08 11:48 AM
A VISION Your a vision of fire, a spark of light, you take me so much higher, on this endless flight. You a beautiful journey, a passionate kiss, when you turn to me, and look at me, just like this. Your a precious treasure, a dream come true, a boundless pleasure, is wrapped up in you. Your a sparkling sunset, a glowing full moon, the love I could never get, and not a moment too soon. Your the reoccuring dream, the one I cant forget, the love so extreme, that leaves me breathless, and wet. your everything ive ever wanted, and all that I could need, and now that I have found you, im following your lead. Your everything thats right, and all I wished you'de be, thank you for this love, its truely set me free. by Roberta Murdock 10/04/08 This write of fire and flame. Makes me feel life's such a shame. For in your mind its not my name. That has you off on this beautiful flight. Longing for him each and every night. Rock&roll this is a very cool write. Wink. I hope you have found a very special dude. Who will love ya and never be rude. I have,thank you babe.