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Topic: ONE STEP FORWARD...2 STEPS BACK
luv2roknroll's photo
Wed 10/01/08 09:09 PM
ONE STEP FORWARD...2 STEPS BACK


I quit the dope
one step forward
Im addicted to love
2 steps back

I finally talked to my mother
one step forward
My father has passed
2 steps back

I fixed my car
one step forward
My licence is suspended
2 steps back

I made love to a man
one step forward
We havent talked since
2 steps back

I dont cry anymore
one step forward
I hold it inside
2 steps back

I see my life more clearly now
one step forward
I see what ive done
2 steps back

Ive finally forgot about HIM
one step forward
I still look at his picture
2 steps back

I love myself
one step forward
Im not sure who I am
2 steps back

I know how to live
one step forward
I wish I was dead
2 steps back

by Roberta Murdock 10/01/08




Winx's photo
Wed 10/01/08 09:11 PM
That is so good.flowerforyou

You need to take another step forward though.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Wed 10/01/08 09:13 PM
Love is you
2 steps forward
Hate is gone
2 steps forward
Life is worthy of you
2 steps forward
You Rock
2 steps forward
Brilliant in body, soul and mind
Priceless flowerforyou

itsmetina's photo
Wed 10/01/08 09:14 PM
good oneflowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 10/01/08 09:17 PM
flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 10/01/08 09:21 PM
This is great....flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Roco's photo
Wed 10/01/08 09:32 PM
beautiful..very beautiful...here's one..

I finally realized my life's purpose - one step forward
I will die tonight - no more steps.


Roco

kc0003's photo
Wed 10/01/08 09:39 PM
nice write...well done

flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 10/01/08 09:53 PM

beautiful..very beautiful...here's one..

I finally realized my life's purpose - one step forward
I will die tonight - no more steps.


Roco
huh huh You okay Dude?

Roco's photo
Wed 10/01/08 10:00 PM
ah yah...i'm fine, nothing's going to happen, not that i know of at least...i just wanted to match the seriousness of the poem...you know..

Roco

Roco's photo
Wed 10/01/08 10:00 PM
thanks for asking.

Roco

no photo
Wed 10/01/08 10:02 PM

thanks for asking.

Roco
no probbigsmile

luv2roknroll's photo
Wed 10/01/08 10:35 PM

Love is you
2 steps forward
Hate is gone
2 steps forward
Life is worthy of you
2 steps forward
You Rock
2 steps forward
Brilliant in body, soul and mind
Priceless flowerforyou
That is so beautiful...Thank you!!

luv2roknroll's photo
Wed 10/01/08 10:36 PM

That is so good.flowerforyou

You need to take another step forward though.flowerforyou
I will I promise babe.

luv2roknroll's photo
Wed 10/01/08 11:01 PM
Eventually I will take enough steps forward, that I can hopefully not take too many more back. Thanks for caring Minglers...

you guys rock!!!!!!!!

luv2roknroll's photo
Wed 10/01/08 11:05 PM
Edited by luv2roknroll on Wed 10/01/08 11:07 PM

beautiful..very beautiful...here's one..

I finally realized my life's purpose - one step forward
I will die tonight - no more steps.


Roco
I dont really want to die...life is just alittle tougher than I had anticipated...but I will live...and live well...thats for sure.Just a few more baby steps, thats all.

Havaman's photo
Thu 10/02/08 12:01 AM

ONE STEP FORWARD...2 STEPS BACK


I quit the dope
one step forward
Im addicted to love
2 steps back

I finally talked to my mother
one step forward
My father has passed
2 steps back

I fixed my car
one step forward
My licence is suspended
2 steps back

I made love to a man
one step forward
We havent talked since
2 steps back

I dont cry anymore
one step forward
I hold it inside
2 steps back

I see my life more clearly now
one step forward
I see what ive done
2 steps back

Ive finally forgot about HIM
one step forward
I still look at his picture
2 steps back

I love myself
one step forward
Im not sure who I am
2 steps back

I know how to live
one step forward
I wish I was dead
2 steps back

by Roberta Murdock 10/01/08





Roberta..:heart:
You are so friggen special....if you only knew..you would have 100 billion steps forward!!

Winx's photo
Thu 10/02/08 09:03 AM


That is so good.flowerforyou

You need to take another step forward though.flowerforyou
I will I promise babe.


One day at a time.flowers

luv2roknroll's photo
Thu 10/02/08 11:36 PM
Edited by luv2roknroll on Thu 10/02/08 11:37 PM







Roberta..:heart:
You are so friggen special....if you only knew..you would have 100 billion steps forward!!
I love ya Brad!!!

breathless1's photo
Thu 10/02/08 11:41 PM
Real, raw, complex yet simple, and expresses your innermost human vulnerability. :wink:

So, take that stupid dog collar off your neck and stop choking yourself, will you? laugh

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