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Topic: ONE STEP FORWARD...2 STEPS BACK
luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Wed 10/01/08 09:09 PM
ONE STEP FORWARD...2 STEPS BACK I quit the dope one step forward Im addicted to love 2 steps back I finally talked to my mother one step forward My father has passed 2 steps back I fixed my car one step forward My licence is suspended 2 steps back I made love to a man one step forward We havent talked since 2 steps back I dont cry anymore one step forward I hold it inside 2 steps back I see my life more clearly now one step forward I see what ive done 2 steps back Ive finally forgot about HIM one step forward I still look at his picture 2 steps back I love myself one step forward Im not sure who I am 2 steps back I know how to live one step forward I wish I was dead 2 steps back by Roberta Murdock 10/01/08

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Wed 10/01/08 09:11 PM
That is so good. You need to take another step forward though.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 10/01/08 09:13 PM
Love is you 2 steps forward Hate is gone 2 steps forward Life is worthy of you 2 steps forward You Rock 2 steps forward Brilliant in body, soul and mind Priceless

itsmetina Joined Sun 12/09/07 Posts: 18944	Wed 10/01/08 09:14 PM
good one

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Wed 10/01/08 09:17 PM


MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Wed 10/01/08 09:21 PM
This is great....

Roco Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 1165	Wed 10/01/08 09:32 PM
beautiful..very beautiful...here's one.. I finally realized my life's purpose - one step forward I will die tonight - no more steps. Roco

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 10/01/08 09:39 PM
nice write...well done

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Wed 10/01/08 09:53 PM
beautiful..very beautiful...here's one.. I finally realized my life's purpose - one step forward I will die tonight - no more steps. Roco You okay Dude?

Roco Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 1165	Wed 10/01/08 10:00 PM
ah yah...i'm fine, nothing's going to happen, not that i know of at least...i just wanted to match the seriousness of the poem...you know.. Roco

Roco Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 1165	Wed 10/01/08 10:00 PM
thanks for asking. Roco

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Wed 10/01/08 10:02 PM
thanks for asking. Roco no prob

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Wed 10/01/08 10:35 PM
Love is you 2 steps forward Hate is gone 2 steps forward Life is worthy of you 2 steps forward You Rock 2 steps forward Brilliant in body, soul and mind Priceless That is so beautiful...Thank you!!

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Wed 10/01/08 10:36 PM
That is so good. You need to take another step forward though. I will I promise babe.

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Wed 10/01/08 11:01 PM
Eventually I will take enough steps forward, that I can hopefully not take too many more back. Thanks for caring Minglers... you guys rock!!!!!!!!

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Wed 10/01/08 11:05 PM Edited by luv2roknroll on Wed 10/01/08 11:07 PM
beautiful..very beautiful...here's one.. I finally realized my life's purpose - one step forward I will die tonight - no more steps. Roco I dont really want to die...life is just alittle tougher than I had anticipated...but I will live...and live well...thats for sure.Just a few more baby steps, thats all.

Havaman Joined Sun 08/03/08 Posts: 426	Thu 10/02/08 12:01 AM
ONE STEP FORWARD...2 STEPS BACK I quit the dope one step forward Im addicted to love 2 steps back I finally talked to my mother one step forward My father has passed 2 steps back I fixed my car one step forward My licence is suspended 2 steps back I made love to a man one step forward We havent talked since 2 steps back I dont cry anymore one step forward I hold it inside 2 steps back I see my life more clearly now one step forward I see what ive done 2 steps back Ive finally forgot about HIM one step forward I still look at his picture 2 steps back I love myself one step forward Im not sure who I am 2 steps back I know how to live one step forward I wish I was dead 2 steps back by Roberta Murdock 10/01/08 Roberta.. You are so friggen special....if you only knew..you would have 100 billion steps forward!!

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Thu 10/02/08 09:03 AM
That is so good. You need to take another step forward though. I will I promise babe. One day at a time.

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Thu 10/02/08 11:36 PM Edited by luv2roknroll on Thu 10/02/08 11:37 PM
Roberta.. You are so friggen special....if you only knew..you would have 100 billion steps forward!! I love ya Brad!!!

breathless1 Joined Tue 09/23/08 Posts: 490	Thu 10/02/08 11:41 PM
Real, raw, complex yet simple, and expresses your innermost human vulnerability. So, take that stupid dog collar off your neck and stop choking yourself, will you?