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You feel alone baby?
“Feel that warm breeze in your hair that’s me all around you” You have shivers baby? “Im sorry I like running my fingers along the side of your neck” Your sad baby? “All flowers will die, don’t worry I’ll get you more” You feel like someone is watching you baby? “You know I cant help it, I love getting lost in your eyes” Your angry baby? “Please forgive me I know I still have unfinished things to do” Your crying baby? “I’m sorry my love for it was my time to die” |
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i really really like this!
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You feel alone baby? “Feel that warm breeze in your hair that’s me all around you” You have shivers baby? “Im sorry I like running my fingers along the side of your neck” Your sad baby? “All flowers will die, don’t worry I’ll get you more” You feel like someone is watching you baby? “You know I cant help it, I love getting lost in your eyes” Your angry baby? “Please forgive me I know I still have unfinished things to do” Your crying baby? “I’m sorry my love for it was my time to die” OMG, please that broke my heart!!!!!!!!!! |
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awwwwwwwwwwww
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Just buried my husband 2 months ago today. What an awsome poem.
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Just buried my husband 2 months ago today. What an awsome poem. |
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Edited by
jimmy99005
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Tue 09/30/08 09:22 AM
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Just buried my husband 2 months ago today. What an awsome poem. I'm sorry I didn't mean to make anyone cry. |
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OMG that gave me goosebumps!!!!
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Just buried my husband 2 months ago today. What an awsome poem. I'm sorry I didn't mean to make anyone cry. |
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That is beautiful, you are very talented.
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Very nice poem, Jimmy! You really know how to make people feel things! Excellent work!
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Wow. Very powerful...and such a unique write.
Ty for posting it...it's great. |
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Awesome {{jimmy}}
You feel alone baby? “Feel that warm breeze in your hair that’s me all around you” You have shivers baby? “Im sorry I like running my fingers along the side of your neck” Your sad baby? “All flowers will die, don’t worry I’ll get you more” You feel like someone is watching you baby? “You know I cant help it, I love getting lost in your eyes” Your angry baby? “Please forgive me I know I still have unfinished things to do” Your crying baby? “I’m sorry my love for it was my time to die” |
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very creative
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Simply beautiful
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Awesome write.
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