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Topic: This Lonely Feeling
tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Sun 09/28/08 02:52 PM
Yet again that feeling creeps up, And I just can't shake it. Then my mind goes a mile a minute About absolutely nothing. I wish that I knew how to cure this feeling. I wish I could know exactly what to do. I wish that I could breathe And be ok. Why can't I just be content? Why can't I just be ok? But I can't shake this lonely feeling. I am surrounded by people but the feeling is still there. Breathe, breathe, breathe Tanya 9-29-08

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Sun 09/28/08 02:58 PM
nice write

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Sun 09/28/08 03:05 PM
nice write thanks

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sun 09/28/08 03:37 PM
touching

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Sun 09/28/08 03:40 PM
touching

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sun 09/28/08 03:42 PM
touching

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 09/29/08 06:54 AM
"Breathe, breathe, breathe" that's a great start when trying to determine what to do

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Mon 09/29/08 07:30 PM
"Breathe, breathe, breathe" that's a great start when trying to determine what to do

No1sLove Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 10342	Mon 09/29/08 07:38 PM
Heart wrenching and oh, so familiar.

awolf1010 Joined Sun 03/30/08 Posts: 7251	Mon 09/29/08 07:42 PM
your curlers are too tight again!!!!

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 09/29/08 07:43 PM
join a dating web site i know a good one called mingle2 where everybodys like family nice write

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Mon 09/29/08 07:52 PM
Heart wrenching and oh, so familiar.

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Mon 09/29/08 07:53 PM
your curlers are too tight again!!!!

mcattygarnett Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 3527	Mon 09/29/08 07:55 PM
Yet again that feeling creeps up, And I just can't shake it. Then my mind goes a mile a minute About absolutely nothing. I wish that I knew how to cure this feeling. I wish I could know exactly what to do. I wish that I could breathe And be ok. Why can't I just be content? Why can't I just be ok? But I can't shake this lonely feeling. I am surrounded by people but the feeling is still there. Breathe, breathe, breathe Tanya 9-29-08 very nice, I can relate to this

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Mon 09/29/08 08:03 PM
Yet again that feeling creeps up, And I just can't shake it. Then my mind goes a mile a minute About absolutely nothing. I wish that I knew how to cure this feeling. I wish I could know exactly what to do. I wish that I could breathe And be ok. Why can't I just be content? Why can't I just be ok? But I can't shake this lonely feeling. I am surrounded by people but the feeling is still there. Breathe, breathe, breathe Tanya 9-29-08 very nice, I can relate to this

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 09/29/08 08:13 PM
"I am surrounded by people but the feeling is still there. " hard to be in this situation but it is possible... hope it passes soon...

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Tue 09/30/08 03:53 AM
"I am surrounded by people but the feeling is still there. " hard to be in this situation but it is possible... hope it passes soon... Thanks for reading and commenting.

tigerman1956 Joined Fri 08/18/06 Posts: 11768	Tue 09/30/08 03:59 AM
TANYA, THAT WAS VERY GOOD HOWEVER YOU ARE NEVER ALONE, SO LONG AS YOU HAVE TWO THINGS, GOD & FRIENDS HELLO MY FRIEND

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Tue 09/30/08 04:05 AM
TANYA, THAT WAS VERY GOOD HOWEVER YOU ARE NEVER ALONE, SO LONG AS YOU HAVE TWO THINGS, GOD & FRIENDS HELLO MY FRIEND Thank you!

beachbum069 Joined Mon 04/07/08 Posts: 14325	Tue 09/30/08 04:30 AM