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Topic: Hurricane
myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Sat 09/27/08 12:15 PM
In his emerald eyes, kindness swells and circles like the outer bands of a hurricane. I stand and feel his wind blow hard against my face so that when I breathe it’s him I inhale. If I could measure my love for this beautiful man it would span the distance of a hundred galaxies a hundred times over and carry the power of angry infatuation and blind faith. If I could taste my love for him it would be sweet like spring honeysuckle and linger like the slight salt from a kiss goodnight. I do not shield my powerless form, now drenched in the downpour of my devotion. He smiles and I allow myself to be washed away in this ocean of us. In his emerald eyes, kindness swells and circles like the outer bands of a hurricane. I choose to stand and feel his wind blow hard against my face so that when I breathe it’s him I inhale.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sat 09/27/08 12:16 PM
Wow! Most Excellent!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 09/27/08 12:25 PM
nice

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Sat 09/27/08 12:26 PM
Great job!

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sat 09/27/08 12:37 PM Edited by s1owhand on Sat 09/27/08 01:28 PM
oh yes nice storm surge

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 09/27/08 01:24 PM
BRAVO!!!

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Sat 09/27/08 03:18 PM
Excellent!

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Sat 09/27/08 04:27 PM
Thank you d4tc Mirror direct Harold pkd Mystique

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Sat 09/27/08 07:38 PM
Such passion

Cavatica Joined Thu 07/31/08 Posts: 305	Sat 09/27/08 07:44 PM
Passion and intensity that I have never before seen in written words..most excellent myanimalcracker

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Sat 09/27/08 09:33 PM
Thank you Bill Cav

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