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Topic: Midnight Blue
kc0003's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:00 PM

You draw your world differently
These days
With colors I don’t understand

In my mind I see the canvas you are working on

I am Toneless
My Monochrome state has no place in the Spectrum of your ever changing
emotion
This Hue of emptiness,
leaves me numb
Yet, I feel each pass of your hand
The breeze takes me back,
to a time when I was your favorite instrument; we drew with reckless abandon

And oh, how we did draw…

Red skies
And fireflies
Passionate scenes
On sidewalk dreams

Life was beautiful then…
Filled with blossoming love in endless variety
And it’s only now that you see I was not the source of your unhappiness
It lies within you
Deep
No matter how many times you try to wash it away
With your white wine
Or the green tint of the apple martinis’
It always comes back
Crystal clear
An effect, not even you could master

No, not in your charcoal sketch dreams
Or the watercolor reality of lonely nights
And my tears fall
No longer innocent
From my cheek
Forming a puddle around me
Leaving me floating
Like an island

Don’t worry
I am not fool enough to believe
You could swim
In my pleas and ever be touched
By their meaning
So for now,
Forever
Pacify this empty easel
As time takes its toll
And color my heart at
Midnight
Blue


kc08

no photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:01 PM


You draw your world differently
These days
With colors I don’t understand

In my mind I see the canvas you are working on

I am Toneless
My Monochrome state has no place in the Spectrum of your ever changing
emotion
This Hue of emptiness,
leaves me numb
Yet, I feel each pass of your hand
The breeze takes me back,
to a time when I was your favorite instrument; we drew with reckless abandon

And oh, how we did draw…

Red skies
And fireflies
Passionate scenes
On sidewalk dreams

Life was beautiful then…
Filled with blossoming love in endless variety
And it’s only now that you see I was not the source of your unhappiness
It lies within you
Deep
No matter how many times you try to wash it away
With your white wine
Or the green tint of the apple martinis’
It always comes back
Crystal clear
An effect, not even you could master

No, not in your charcoal sketch dreams
Or the watercolor reality of lonely nights
And my tears fall
No longer innocent
From my cheek
Forming a puddle around me
Leaving me floating
Like an island

Don’t worry
I am not fool enough to believe
You could swim
In my pleas and ever be touched
By their meaning
So for now,
Forever
Pacify this empty easel
As time takes its toll
And color my heart at
Midnight
Blue


kc08


Beautiful visuals painted with words.

s1owhand's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:03 PM
yes kc - fabulous! flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:06 PM
tha you for that (A) i always like it when you stop in

:heart: flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:06 PM

yes kc - fabulous! flowerforyou



thanks s1ow i appreciate that

LAMom's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:11 PM
Your canvas paints a vision so deep within your Soul,, you shine as does your Soul,, Such compassion fills you,,,:heart:

no photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:24 PM

tha you for that (A) i always like it when you stop in

:heart: flowerforyou


:heart:

kc0003's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:26 PM

Your canvas paints a vision so deep within your Soul,, you shine as does your Soul,, Such compassion fills you,,,:heart:



thank you
as someone who always has her hand out to others these same comments could and do easily apply to you

:heart: you

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 09/22/08 08:02 PM
Beautifully painted type there {{{KC}}}

flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou



(I have the song Midnight Blue going thru my Bear Brain right now...)

kc0003's photo
Mon 09/22/08 08:21 PM

Beautifully painted type there {{{KC}}}

flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou



(I have the song Midnight Blue going thru my Bear Brain right now...)



thank you again mst...
don't let it play too loud it is getting late

:heart: flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 09/22/08 08:41 PM
Nice kev
"water color reality of lonely nights"
Good line

S

no photo
Tue 09/23/08 05:34 AM
Nice kc

D

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 09/23/08 06:08 AM
Hmmm an otter is too boisterous for this write. Midnight Blue - ah yes, I can be an owl cruising through your creative currents, dipping and blending on silent wings.

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 09/23/08 08:12 AM
I so love the way you put words together ... they evoke such emotion, colour and texture across a human landscape...

flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 09/23/08 08:24 AM

Beautifully painted type there {{{KC}}}

flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou



(I have the song Midnight Blue going thru my Bear Brain right now...)
Had to YouTube and play the Melissa Manchester version.flowerforyou flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 09/23/08 09:08 AM
You always seem to make my heart beat a little faster, my eyes see more clearly, and my soul feel a little deeper with the scenes you paint...

This is heavenly as always (((K)))flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 09/23/08 09:19 AM
the placing of your words make me feel as if I have been there right with you, poignantly felt:smile: :smile: flowerforyou flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Tue 09/23/08 09:21 AM
Excellent Write! happy drinker

no photo
Tue 09/23/08 11:35 AM
.....not fool enough to believe you could swim in my pleas and ever be touched by their meaning....

Ummm yeah this line is amazing
David

kc0003's photo
Tue 09/23/08 05:33 PM
thank you both

stef flowerforyou
david drinker

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