Topic: Awakened Dreamer
SmurfyPoet292721's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:42 AM
Love's pixie dust has faded
Nothing but memories remain,
Loneliness has battered and beaten that heart of his.
Unafraid to cry, tears shatter strong words,
Forgiveness dangles from her tongue
Why?
They danced around the fires of hell
Defied separation....
Loving him was like breathing
The only sanity in an upside-down world
She dried his tears and was the gentle calm after the storm
A dreamers eyes have been opened to the light of day
Lies shattered every dream and washed away trust
Still one last chance tumbles in her brain
Mixing with the past
Oh if only none of this happened
Pricks of anger come and go
What to do?
Love is the enemy
Yet it's also her best friend.
Confusion casts a shadow over her heart
Somewhere lies the truth
Within that truth lies a love
She has always cherished


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Mon 09/22/08 07:45 AM
and misplaced love...the enemy indeed....beautiful write Nickiflowers flowers flowers flowers flowers

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:46 AM
Oooo, I believe you describe inner turmoil very well here - that point of "what exactly do I want?" Nice job, tater......

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:49 AM
As always very good write.bigsmile

SmurfyPoet292721's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:53 AM
thanks guys

flame1cutie's photo
Mon 09/22/08 08:07 AM
Very nice writeflowerforyou

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Mon 09/22/08 08:09 AM
(((Nicki)))))

Beautiful as always flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Mon 09/22/08 08:19 AM
Awesome! flowers

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Mon 09/22/08 08:22 AM
very niceflowerforyou flowerforyou :smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 09/22/08 05:42 PM
flowers :heart: flowers