Topic: Dark Night
myanimalcracker's photo
Mon 09/15/08 11:09 AM
coming for me
to settle down the anger
nebulous dark words

home casts astray
a quilted city desperate, chasing
itself, the drowning

laid out in
the soft concrete and fragile
bone caves, electric

and darkness collided
together emerging anew, fragrant, coursing
through every vein

endless, lapsing, madmen
abandoned and lost women and
high-heeled babies

splintering, and businessmen
on a secret drinking trip
hazy nighttime traveling

this space contained
ourselves, raw, breakable, blood pulse
overheating and beating

and I stumble
through this all sliced by
a creeping night


s1owhand's photo
Mon 09/15/08 09:57 PM
hands reaching out
arms wide
fingers splayed

blindly groping
the way only the newly blind
search

flowerforyou

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Tue 09/16/08 05:49 AM
hands clapping- and the visual high heeled babies, what can I sayflowerforyou flowerforyou :smile:

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Tue 09/16/08 06:40 AM
flowerforyou standing ovation :heart: one of the best i've read in a long while. I hope you don't underestimate your writing skills :heart: Your a very talented writer

Mystique42's photo
Tue 09/16/08 06:43 AM
flowerforyou Nicely done

myanimalcracker's photo
Tue 09/16/08 08:40 PM
Thank you

Harold flowerforyou
pkd flowerforyou
Bill flowerforyou
Mystique flowerforyou


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LAMom's photo
Tue 09/16/08 09:25 PM
Well now Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn I agree with every read,, I am pulled in wanting more,,
Most awesome write flowers

ronin77's photo
Wed 09/17/08 09:39 AM
Beautiful!