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Topic: five gifts of me
PoeticMaster Joined Fri 07/18/08 Posts: 411	Fri 09/12/08 10:42 PM
I expose my weathered body for your enjoyment. I open the grey portal to the labyrinth of my mind complete with a map to explore its complexities I tear down the invisible walls that surround my heart and allow you to pitch a tent with all amenities desired. I print and lay at your doorstep an eternal passport to every incarnation that my old soul has remaining. I release my liquid life essence I have kept dammed with the ethereal canoe made specifically for two. My 5 gifts to the one that captures my heart and soul.

wickedme Joined Sat 09/06/08 Posts: 15	Fri 09/12/08 10:47 PM
Wow, that is really beautiful...

Myrrdin Joined Sat 08/25/07 Posts: 540	Fri 09/12/08 10:49 PM
I expose my weathered body for your enjoyment. I open the grey portal to the labyrinth of my mind complete with a map to explore its complexities I tear down the invisible walls that surround my heart and allow you to pitch a tent with all amenities desired. I print and lay at your doorstep an eternal passport to every incarnation that my old soul has remaining. I release my liquid life essence I have kept dammed with the ethereal canoe made specifically for two. My 5 gifts to the one that captures my heart and soul. that's pretty Kickazz

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 09/12/08 11:23 PM
I expose my weathered body for your enjoyment. I open the grey portal to the labyrinth of my mind complete with a map to explore its complexities I tear down the invisible walls that surround my heart and allow you to pitch a tent with all amenities desired. I print and lay at your doorstep an eternal passport to every incarnation that my old soul has remaining. I release my liquid life essence I have kept dammed with the ethereal canoe made specifically for two. My 5 gifts to the one that captures my heart and soul. Beautiful

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 09/13/08 06:30 AM
I expose my weathered body for your enjoyment. I open the grey portal to the labyrinth of my mind complete with a map to explore its complexities I tear down the invisible walls that surround my heart and allow you to pitch a tent with all amenities desired. I print and lay at your doorstep an eternal passport to every incarnation that my old soul has remaining. I release my liquid life essence I have kept dammed with the ethereal canoe made specifically for two. My 5 gifts to the one that captures my heart and soul. no better gifts could ever be had, i hold them precious.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 09/13/08 06:57 AM
very nice

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 09/13/08 09:46 AM
Nice...

PoeticMaster Joined Fri 07/18/08 Posts: 411	Sat 09/13/08 01:52 PM
I expose my weathered body for your enjoyment. I open the grey portal to the labyrinth of my mind complete with a map to explore its complexities I tear down the invisible walls that surround my heart and allow you to pitch a tent with all amenities desired. I print and lay at your doorstep an eternal passport to every incarnation that my old soul has remaining. I release my liquid life essence I have kept dammed with the ethereal canoe made specifically for two. My 5 gifts to the one that captures my heart and soul. no better gifts could ever be had, i hold them precious. wicked: thank you pkd: angel: mom: thanks myrr: