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Topic: Isolation
myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Fri 09/12/08 10:32 AM
I am a miracle worker by force of you, deaf and dumb to my advances, you fumble unfulfilled in a cold, love-starved room. In your isolation I implore, let me lead you to my fire. Let me smash your muted mantra of loneliness into a million beautiful fractures. Let me pick up the pieces and cut myself on the sharp edges of our potential and bleed voice to your silent agony. Let my surgeon hands transplant my heart to your chest. Let my wrecking-ball words swing at your self-imposed solitude. Let me let you love me. Look at me and understand.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 09/12/08 01:41 PM
(((myanimalc))) i see a beautiful miracle what a wonderful expression of rescue from loneliness

PoeticMaster Joined Fri 07/18/08 Posts: 411	Fri 09/12/08 03:03 PM
beautiful animal

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Fri 09/12/08 03:06 PM
Thank you s1ow & Poetic

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Fri 09/12/08 03:07 PM
Excellent write....

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Fri 09/12/08 03:15 PM
nicely done

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Fri 09/12/08 05:04 PM
Thank you Up2Us & mteagle

Raven100 Joined Sun 07/20/08 Posts: 49	Fri 09/12/08 05:23 PM
I am a miracle worker by force of you, deaf and dumb to my advances, you fumble unfulfilled in a cold, love-starved room. In your isolation I implore, let me lead you to my fire. Let me smash your muted mantra of loneliness into a million beautiful fractures. Let me pick up the pieces and cut myself on the sharp edges of our potential and bleed voice to your silent agony. Let my surgeon hands transplant my heart to your chest. Let my wrecking-ball words swing at your self-imposed solitude. Let me let you love me. Look at me and understand. Very well done Myanimalcracker....

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Fri 09/12/08 05:39 PM
I am a miracle worker by force of you, deaf and dumb to my advances, you fumble unfulfilled in a cold, love-starved room. In your isolation I implore, let me lead you to my fire. Let me smash your muted mantra of loneliness into a million beautiful fractures. Let me pick up the pieces and cut myself on the sharp edges of our potential and bleed voice to your silent agony. Let my surgeon hands transplant my heart to your chest. Let my wrecking-ball words swing at your self-imposed solitude. Let me let you love me. Look at me and understand. No lovely. You are a miracle period.

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Fri 09/12/08 07:39 PM
Thank you Raven & MsWiz

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Fri 09/12/08 07:50 PM
So very nice animal

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Sat 09/13/08 01:30 AM
So very nice animal Thank you, sweets

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 09/13/08 06:35 AM
wow, soul-full, magic

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