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Topic: Time Without End
2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Fri 09/12/08 01:57 AM
Through the mist of time you came to me the sound of your voice is like a beautiful melody Loving and touching soft tender kisses holding one another in harmonious love like the beautiful misic you hear from a snow white Dove Oh my darling how have you done this to me our hearts beat together in perfect harmoney Oh my Angel let me look in your eyes I want you to see the happy tears I cry I Love You my darling put your hand on my heart I hurt so terribly inside whenever we're apart You are my strength you are the air that I breath like the wind caressing my skin with a soft summer breeze I will Love You always I would do anything for you I would pull down thw stars from heaven if you asked me to Honey just know with all certianty my heart will always be yours forever eternally By Daniel 09/06/08 I Love You

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Fri 09/12/08 08:41 AM
Nice write Daniel Good to see you're happy

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/12/08 12:34 PM
"....I would do anything for you I would pull down thw stars from heaven if you asked me to ....." Just love that! Such beautiful imagery and sentiment

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Fri 09/12/08 03:12 PM
Nice write Daniel Good to see you're happy Thank you vicki.. i'm making it..

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Fri 09/12/08 03:13 PM
"....I would do anything for you I would pull down thw stars from heaven if you asked me to ....." Just love that! Such beautiful imagery and sentiment awww Angel, so very sweet of you to say, thank you..

mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Fri 09/12/08 03:14 PM
very nice!!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Fri 09/12/08 03:17 PM
very nice!! Thanks Eagle.. is that you picking me up agter we went out drinking?...

mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Fri 09/12/08 05:02 PM
very nice!! Thanks Eagle.. is that you picking me up agter we went out drinking?... H*ll no!!! that's you pickin' me up!!

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Fri 09/12/08 05:03 PM
Very nice!

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Fri 09/12/08 05:41 PM
Through the mist of time you came to me the sound of your voice is like a beautiful melody Loving and touching soft tender kisses holding one another in harmonious love like the beautiful misic you hear from a snow white Dove Oh my darling how have you done this to me our hearts beat together in perfect harmoney Oh my Angel let me look in your eyes I want you to see the happy tears I cry I Love You my darling put your hand on my heart I hurt so terribly inside whenever we're apart You are my strength you are the air that I breath like the wind caressing my skin with a soft summer breeze I will Love You always I would do anything for you I would pull down thw stars from heaven if you asked me to Honey just know with all certianty my heart will always be yours forever eternally By Daniel 09/06/08 I Love You Such beautiful thoughts Daniel ~

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 09/15/08 11:01 AM
Nice write Daniel Good to see you're happy Thank you vicki.. i'm making it.. Just know Daniel you will always have a friend in me and I wish you the best always!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Tue 09/16/08 04:03 PM
Thank you for the other replies I missed, I don't get to get on here much, but they are much appreciated..