Topic: Learning To Swim
Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 09/10/08 02:21 AM
Learning To Swim

Caught in a moment
Where everything's right,
Emotions unstrewn
With a clear line of sight.

From out of the darkness
Came an ocean anew,
Holding me buoyant,
Uplifted in you.

No need for excitement,
No fear I would drown.
You were the one
Who'd not let me down.

Soon changes occured
With dark clouds on the rise,
Prayed I these storms
Would quickly subside.

The tempest soon came
Though I tried, I confess
To ride out the storm
Though under duress.

Your waves how they rocked me
As my heart cried in fear,
My spirit grew weary
For you were not near.

I held my own breath
And still I went down,
Unable to swim,
I feared that I'd drown.

I reached out for nothing,
Only damp in my grasp.
I looked up to see you
And saw nothing,

Alas.

I kicked with my feet
And grabbed at the sea,
Steadily rising
From deep currents of thee.

I searched for a harbor
But none could be found
So learned I to swim
Till my feet touched the ground.

Now my sea legs are steady
Though I walk upon land.
Now life has moved on
As I play in the sand.

Fadedspirit 9/9/2008

tanyaann's photo
Wed 09/10/08 03:32 AM
flowerforyou excellent! well written! flowerforyou

mteagle31's photo
Wed 09/10/08 06:12 AM
Another great write faded!

LAMom's photo
Wed 09/10/08 09:11 AM

Learning To Swim

Caught in a moment
Where everything's right,
Emotions unstrewn
With a clear line of sight.

From out of the darkness
Came an ocean anew,
Holding me buoyant,
Uplifted in you.

No need for excitement,
No fear I would drown.
You were the one
Who'd not let me down.

Soon changes occured
With dark clouds on the rise,
Prayed I these storms
Would quickly subside.

The tempest soon came
Though I tried, I confess
To ride out the storm
Though under duress.

Your waves how they rocked me
As my heart cried in fear,
My spirit grew weary
For you were not near.

I held my own breath
And still I went down,
Unable to swim,
I feared that I'd drown.

I reached out for nothing,
Only damp in my grasp.
I looked up to see you
And saw nothing,

Alas.

I kicked with my feet
And grabbed at the sea,
Steadily rising
From deep currents of thee.

I searched for a harbor
But none could be found
So learned I to swim
Till my feet touched the ground.

Now my sea legs are steady
Though I walk upon land.
Now life has moved on
As I play in the sand.

Fadedspirit 9/9/2008


Come Ereeeeeeeee you lets build sand castles, and lay upon the sand making sand Angels,,, Your feet steady your heart healing,,, flowers


Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 09/10/08 09:29 AM
Playing in sand is good right? Take a few more lefts - mud pies are my style-pond swimmer!

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 09/11/08 02:00 AM
Thanks tanyaann. I'm glad you enjoyed.

mteagle, thanks again my friend.

Awwww, thanks LAMom....lol Oh woohoo! I get to make sand angels with mom....hehehehe

Yup DKW. Playing in the sand is a good thing. I coulda talked about mud, but it probably wouldn't have come out as nice.....lol ok who's slinging mud at me? lol

a4leafclover2u2's photo
Fri 09/12/08 07:50 AM
nice one fadedhappy