Topic: going down
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Tue 09/09/08 08:59 PM
I'm fading
Fading fast
I thought this time
It might really last
Instead of being just
Another
Lost moment
In time
But here I am
Going down
About to drown
Trying to find something
To hold onto

It’s getting desperate
I’m floundering
Clutching for a lifeline
God throw me something
Anything
To keep me afloat
In these murky waters
You and I set sail in
When they were crystal blue
Brilliant with the promise
Of you
And a long voyage
In the warm waters
Of passion

Before the undertow
Of uncertainty
And the weight of your
Disinterest
Anchored itself to my feet
Dragging me down deep
Into the loveless sea
I’m being sucked into

I’m hyperventilating
Gulping frantically
at dissipating dreams
And the faintly scented
Air of
Love
I had hopes of inhaling
Only to find myself
Choking on your
Indifference
And seemingly lack
Of care
Help me find
Cleaner air
Cooperate
Resuscitate
Before it’s too late
Cause I’m going down
…down
……down
………do





LAMom's photo
Tue 09/09/08 09:04 PM
Holding you lovely Angel ,,, take my hand you are not alone on this sea,,

Kiss's,,,:heart:

Dangerous_Kitchen's photo
Tue 09/09/08 09:09 PM
flowerforyou

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Tue 09/09/08 09:16 PM

Holding you lovely Angel ,,, take my hand you are not alone on this sea,,

Kiss's,,,:heart:


<<----floating in a sea of contented friendship on the ship known as Denise ...:heart:

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Tue 09/09/08 09:16 PM

flowerforyou


Thank you...

s1owhand's photo
Tue 09/09/08 09:18 PM
here, slip out of those damp clothes!
there are large soft bath towels for you...
fresh and warm from the laundry
no indifference in these threads!

flowerforyou :heart: bigsmile :heart: flowerforyou

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Tue 09/09/08 09:19 PM

here, slip out of those damp clothes!
there are large soft bath towels for you...
fresh and warm from the laundry
no indifference in these threads!

flowerforyou :heart: bigsmile :heart: flowerforyou


<<------loves H and his soft warm threads of friendship...:heart:

kc0003's photo
Tue 09/09/08 09:28 PM
(((alicia)))

very honest write

always the best kind

:heart: flowerforyou

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Tue 09/09/08 09:32 PM

(((alicia)))

very honest write

always the best kind

:heart: flowerforyou


Thank you sweet KC~:heart:

kc0003's photo
Tue 09/09/08 10:00 PM


(((alicia)))

very honest write

always the best kind

:heart: flowerforyou


Thank you sweet KC~:heart:


no need to thank me
just know that if you fall you will not be alone

AngelLight's photo
Wed 09/10/08 02:26 AM
you are Loved (((A)))...know this, deeply within flowerforyou :heart: :heart: :heart:

flame1cutie's photo
Wed 09/10/08 04:58 AM
flowers

Mystique42's photo
Wed 09/10/08 05:31 AM
As far as I'm concerned LaMom is the good ship lollipop.... ALL ABOARD! We are headed for another great adventure today... take your hopes and bring aboard your smiles! Life changes as we focus on great friendships and not what is lacking.flowers

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Wed 09/10/08 06:05 AM
Throwin' you a 3 cord rope from heaven to hold on to! ;-)

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Wed 09/10/08 07:00 AM

you are Loved (((A)))...know this, deeply within flowerforyou :heart: :heart: :heart:


Thank you AngelFace :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Wed 09/10/08 07:01 AM

flowers


Good morning Cutie! Flowers! How lovely!! :heart:

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Wed 09/10/08 07:01 AM

As far as I'm concerned LaMom is the good ship lollipop.... ALL ABOARD! We are headed for another great adventure today... take your hopes and bring aboard your smiles! Life changes as we focus on great friendships and not what is lacking.flowers


Mornin' Mystique! You dont get much finer than our girl MOM~thanks for stopping by darlin~:heart:

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Wed 09/10/08 07:02 AM

Throwin' you a 3 cord rope from heaven to hold on to! ;-)


<<---grabbing on tight! :heart: