Topic: feeling alone
Queene123's photo
Mon 09/08/08 10:49 AM
Edited by Queene123 on Mon 09/08/08 10:49 AM
Should you ever feel alone
If finding times hard to bare
You can still count on me
Know I shall always be there

You shall be in my thoughts
If you are hurting, I feel it too
It is my friendship sincerity
I shall forever share with you

There each step of the way
My support you can depend
I will listen if you need me
With love your forever friend


Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 09/08/08 03:10 PM
I really really liked this. That was nicely written. How are you doing Queenie?

Karorine's photo
Mon 09/08/08 06:48 PM
Touch, emotional feeling with a zap an urge to feel the deeper kind of love.
Exploring around finding their every darkest secrets wiping every worried wrinkles.
Slowly and lightly outlining their shell to find a way in so they don't feel so alone and scared.
Wiping a tear that slowly drips from their soul.
Your touch reminds them that they are not completly alone.
Now there is a feeling of a deep lonely thought that you may feel that you are alone and there is no exscape, until one person reaches out and reminds you that you are not the only one that feels so alone.
Take a moment out of your life and reach out a hand and say hello.

Karorine's photo
Wed 09/10/08 01:21 PM
:happy

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 09/10/08 01:41 PM
Nice write!flowerforyou

Mystique42's photo
Wed 09/10/08 02:57 PM
Great write... to the point.flowerforyou

LFMSM's photo
Wed 09/10/08 03:16 PM
Your poem is very well written. Excellent Job!

Socratease's photo
Wed 09/10/08 04:14 PM
Nice write