Topic: Over
myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 09/07/08 01:45 PM
It was over before it started.

I was empty-handed.

You were empty-hearted.

I was reaching blindly

into your abyss.

No surprise it ended up like this.

See, I had no reason

and you had no rhyme.

And it was all a great waste of time.

Never would have happened.

Never could have been.

Just another battle I’ll never win.

Just another love

draped in illusion.

Time to unravel this grand delusion.

And at the core

what it will say

is that things were meant

to be this way.

jeff7763's photo
Sun 09/07/08 01:46 PM
Very nice.










and the poem was not bad either!

no photo
Sun 09/07/08 01:51 PM
flowerforyou " I was reaching blindly into your abyss." drinker Very beautiful expression tears

jeff7763's photo
Sun 09/07/08 01:51 PM
guess that wasn t as cute as i thought it was. sorry

msmyka's photo
Sun 09/07/08 01:54 PM
flowers

myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 09/07/08 02:01 PM

guess that wasn t as cute as i thought it was. sorry



flowers

it actually was...


myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 09/07/08 02:02 PM
Thank you...

jeff flowerforyou
1000 flowerforyou
myka flowerforyou

flame1cutie's photo
Sun 09/07/08 02:11 PM
Very nice writeflowers flowers