Topic: Tears... fell like the rain
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Sun 09/07/08 08:04 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Sun 09/07/08 08:29 AM
Tears... fell like the rain.

Like a candle set afire.
Our love began to grow.
After the flames grew higher and higher.
We loss track of our love.

Tears... fell like the rain.

Our love left me speechless.
And there's nothing left to say.
Now that silence stands between us.
An it's getting stronger with each and every passing day.

Tears... fell like the rain.

Life it seems is a journey across ones own heart.
We were two days next to each other.
Not even time could break us apart.
Heartache came into the picture, and abruptively had its way.
Our sunny glass day drifted into a storm of heartache an pain.
True Love is now a paisley memory faded by the emptiness of each day.


Tears... fell like the rain.

I'm now searching for myself within the fragments of a broken heart.
A casualty laying helpless on this battle field of love.
Forever is a distant thought of pleasure that I quietly dream of.
Reality is now the measure of heartache, my heart cries from...

Tears... fell like the rain.

A word for a word
A kiss for a tear
The beginning for the end.

Situations often lie.
The truth sometimes is very hard to find.
Girl leave the past behind.
An get on with your life.




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Sun 09/07/08 08:07 AM
Very Nicebigsmile flowerforyou

star1972's photo
Sun 09/07/08 08:07 AM
flowerforyou oh my gosh did u write that for me.flowerforyou
it was amazing and made me cry flowerforyou

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Sun 09/07/08 08:23 AM

flowerforyou oh my gosh did u write that for me.flowerforyou
it was amazing and made me cry flowerforyou
Thank you...flowerforyou
Sometimes heartache is a broken mirror that cast the reflection of us all....flowerforyou

tanyaann's photo
Sun 09/07/08 08:53 AM
wow! amazing! thanks for the write!

flame1cutie's photo
Sun 09/07/08 08:59 AM
That was a very amazing write, it reaches into the soul of everyoneflowerforyou flowerforyou

SangRio's photo
Sun 09/07/08 02:40 PM
that was very touching, very detailed, i like this poem, it shows strong emotions, its strong, i like it, keep writing

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Sun 09/07/08 06:58 PM
Thanks...smokin

Puffins1958's photo
Sun 09/07/08 07:19 PM
very nice, very moving
thank you for sharing it

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LAMom's photo
Sun 09/07/08 11:40 PM
A very heartfelt write,,,

Hugs flowerforyou