Topic: Dirty shoes and hobo blues:D(yeah I dont know what to name i
CeruleanDolly's photo
Fri 09/05/08 04:19 PM
Have you ever seen a man asking for some cash?
But you never hand him any, 'cause he might by hash....
You walk on by without a care
Pretending as thougth he isnt there
I walk on by with that same thought
But then his eyes I had caught
I stepped in side of his dirty shoes
Seeing the life in which he didnt choose!
The feelings of a once proud lion,
In his heart rang true.
Then I saw the raw contempt inside peoples eyes
And I try to hold my tears, trying not to cry
I then stepped out of the old mans shoes
That were old and trashed
He looked at me with owl eyes
I handed him some cash.

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Fri 09/05/08 04:24 PM

Have you ever seen a man asking for some cash?
But you never hand him any, 'cause he might by hash....
You walk on by without a care
Pretending as thougth he isnt there
I walk on by with that same thought
But then his eyes I had caught
I stepped in side of his dirty shoes
Seeing the life in which he didnt choose!
The feelings of a once proud lion,
In his heart rang true.
Then I saw the raw contempt inside peoples eyes
And I try to hold my tears, trying not to cry
I then stepped out of the old mans shoes
That were old and trashed
He looked at me with owl eyes
I handed him some cash.



maybe you could name it "Cha Ching"drinker

Socratease's photo
Fri 09/05/08 04:28 PM
Compassion and help is what even the strongest person needs at some point,especially those less fortunate..neat write

ahuhalicious's photo
Fri 09/05/08 04:35 PM
thats a mighty fine peach ya got there ;)

flame1cutie's photo
Fri 09/05/08 04:50 PM

Have you ever seen a man asking for some cash?
But you never hand him any, 'cause he might by hash....
You walk on by without a care
Pretending as thougth he isnt there
I walk on by with that same thought
But then his eyes I had caught
I stepped in side of his dirty shoes
Seeing the life in which he didnt choose!
The feelings of a once proud lion,
In his heart rang true.
Then I saw the raw contempt inside peoples eyes
And I try to hold my tears, trying not to cry
I then stepped out of the old mans shoes
That were old and trashed
He looked at me with owl eyes
I handed him some cash.
The heart and soul are one, when you look into the eyes of another person. excellent writeflowerforyou

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Fri 09/05/08 10:50 PM
powerful write:smile: flowerforyou flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:19 AM
Why do I get the feeling this has more to come?

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Sat 09/06/08 08:26 AM
Walk In My Shoes... Well done!

LAMom's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:28 AM

Why do I get the feeling this has more to come?


I got the same feelingflowers

Very nice write,,, Compassion goes along way,,flowers