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Topic: river in the city myst
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Thu 09/04/08 09:59 AM Edited by jimz on Thu 09/04/08 10:05 AM
crossing the aqua movements ancient moss the paddle broken all in the diamond spaces bruised plum ego altar of the city where the ghosts read poems never read

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Thu 09/04/08 10:04 AM
Up ****zzzzz creek with a broken paddle! Nice one my friend!!

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Thu 09/04/08 11:10 PM
Nice write jimz.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Fri 09/05/08 02:39 AM
very nice

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Fri 09/05/08 03:46 AM
so nice, just flows

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 09/05/08 07:46 AM
Mornin ((( Jimmy )))))

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Fri 09/05/08 09:20 AM
Sounds like a nice journey (((Jim)))

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