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bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sun 08/31/08 06:24 PM
his words do leave me breathless with new air i breath him in he trickles down my throat and sheds tears upon my sin his voice does carry through my veins my blood it flows for thee i would honor all he is spoken truth upon my knees his touch will shiver melt the ice i welcome him inside submit to all we bring as one there's nothing left to hide his soul has come to take me home shadows birth a new born sun my arm it reaches out falling into madness has begun

somewhatshy2 Joined Sat 03/29/08 Posts: 1758	Sun 08/31/08 06:28 PM
You never cease to amaze me with your writings. Nice

Peccy Joined Thu 06/28/07 Posts: 17181	Sun 08/31/08 06:29 PM
his words do leave me breathless with new air i breath him in he trickles down my throat and sheds tears upon my sin his voice does carry through my veins my blood it flows for thee i would honor all he is spoken truth upon my knees his touch will shiver melt the ice i welcome him inside submit to all we bring as one there's nothing left to hide his soul has come to take me home shadows birth a new born sun my arm it reaches out falling into madness has begun very nice write bastet!

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Sun 08/31/08 06:32 PM
Beautiful

darkowl1 Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 13060	Sun 08/31/08 06:50 PM
aahh yeessss.....

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 09/01/08 01:54 AM
dena, pec, myanimal cracker and dark ~ thanks for reading and commenting! it means alot to me!

PoeticMaster Joined Fri 07/18/08 Posts: 411	Mon 09/01/08 12:04 PM
and wander in My grace

johnboy072472 Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 4874	Mon 09/01/08 12:06 PM


Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 09/01/08 02:44 PM
his words do leave me breathless with new air i breath him in he trickles down my throat and sheds tears upon my sin his voice does carry through my veins my blood it flows for thee i would honor all he is spoken truth upon my knees his touch will shiver melt the ice i welcome him inside submit to all we bring as one there's nothing left to hide his soul has come to take me home shadows birth a new born sun my arm it reaches out falling into madness has begun wow very good write girl

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 09/01/08 05:46 PM
msm ~ i'll be subtle and just say aaahhhhh johnboy ~ glad u like my hometown ~ many thanks!

ddn122 Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 12855	Mon 09/01/08 06:02 PM Edited by ddn122 on Mon 09/01/08 06:02 PM
i liked it

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